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Does my writing show promise?
1st I DO NOT CLAIM TO BE A POET. I’VE NEVER DONE POETRY,
the following is simply my feelings put into writing because I do occaionlly journal. This just so happens to have a poetic feel.
SO, I WANT TO HEAR THE THOUGHTS, FEELINGS, AND INTERPRETATIONS FROM YOU, THE PEOPLE, THE UNBASHFUL AND TRUTHFUL! haha…
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I feel like air…Like suddenly everything I’m not, I no longer feel–my past, my body, my thought–gone. But everything I AM I don’t feel. Is that because I’m nothing, or because I’m not in a place to feel?
I really believe I’m something, but my head got spinning so fast all my thoughts got torn away, torn apart…
Now I don’t know where to start
I really do believe I’m something, but I don’t know where to start.
ps- i’m in my late teens.
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