Poetry?
Hey there, I was wondering if anyone out there was interesting in reading some poetry. I really, really want some feedback on this stuff, to see if it’s worth doing anything with.
the site is http://www.forladida.blogspot.com/
Here’s a sample:
“How much blood can there be in me?”
She asked her mirror
The mirror offered nothing, or
She couldn’t hear.
[Deafness is a problem, dear]
“How many bones have been sown
Into my frame?”
Just the same.
No answers, of course.
[It’s the muteness of the source.]
==
Like little kids
Marveling at nothing more
Than the difference between bodies.
Please-
He softly bids
[Whore]
===
There might be better examples… I just picked a couple. thanks so much!!
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