YOU know the drill, What do you think of my latest poem?
?
“Raindrop Trails”
That is, the decompression of his desires and identity
An explosion consisting of decisions, thoughts, and dreams
The unexplainable tabula rasa experiences that man seeks to discover
Resulting in definitive thesis that man was all born without emotion
Incapable of any thoughtful nature
Rain presses its unimaginable shape deep into the pane
The glossy figures swerve and slide their way
Down, down, into the drain
The trail marks left behind speak of a voyage that has never
Been experienced, endured, or studied
It’s the same way with a man’s thoughts,
The tragic conditioning of a torrential waterfall
Of emotions, tears, feelings and the cure for
This wind is cold to the man
It’s a breeze that chills to the core
Vulnerable and resistant to feelings you abhor
It’s so much easier to ignore than to restore
Why change attitudes or behaviors when yes sir, you’ll take one more
On the rocks, keep your heart locked,
Let that breeze roll in, you see that star?
It’s not shining for you anymore
The dripping of water, the eyes pressed to the glass
The hot smudge of breath creates a whirling, damp, fog
The chills on the neck and the memories from the moon’s trek
Across the smolten sky, now begin to illuminate a shadow of the room
It’s as if fears resemble empty space in life
Scampering, winding, transposing themselves beyond all identity
Pull that coat close sir, pull it tight
The ache in your throat, it’s alright
i’d appreciate it if everyone visited my site and just clicked on a couple ads, that’d make my life!
http://tylerstunna.blogspot.com/
thanks everyone!!
This open post was written 7 months ago | V/U/S: 160, 15, 3 | Edit Post | Leave a reply | Report Post
Reciprocity (0) 
Since writing this post Stunna may have helped people, but has not within the last 4 days. Stunna is a verified member, has been around for 11 months and has 28 posts and 531 replies to their name.
Replies (15)
Where were you?
You can also watch events on Help.com as they happen
Stunna invited 9 users to read this post 7 months ago.
Stunna invited 10 users to read this post 7 months ago.
Sodapop
Kanabi
Stunna edited this post 6 months, 4 weeks ago. Read the previous text »
YOU know the drill, What do you think of my latest poem??
“Raindrop Trails”
A man needs his element
That is, the decompression of his desires and identity
An explosion consisting of decisions, thoughts, and dreams
The unexplainable tabula rasa experiences that man seeks to discover
Resulting in definitive thesis that man was all born without emotion
Incapable of any thoughtful and emotional nature
Rain presses its unimaginable shape deep into the pane
The glossy figures swerve and slide their way
Down, down, down into the drain
The trail marks left behind speak of a voyage that has never
Been experienced, endured, or studied
It’s the same way with a man’s thoughts,
The tragic conditioning of a torrential waterfall
Of emotions, tears, feelings and the cure for
This wind is cold to the man
It’s a breeze that chills to the core
Vulnerable and resistant to the sting that hurts deep
It’s so much easier to ignore than to restore
Why change attitudes or behaviors when yes sir, you’ll take one more
On the rocks, keep your heart locked,
Let that breeze roll in, you see that star?
It’s not shining for you anymore
The dripping of water, the eyes pressed to the glass
The hot smudge of breath creates a fog, invisibility
The chills on the neck, the memories from the moon’s trek
Across the smolten sky, now begin to illuminate a shadow of the room
It’s as if fears resemble empty space in life
Scampering, winding, transposing themselves beyond all identity
Pull that coat close sir, pull it tight
The ache in your throat is so much more than things aren’t alright.
i’d appreciate it if everyone visited my site and just clicked on a couple ads, that’d make my life!
http://tylerstunna.blogspot.com/
thanks everyone!!
Invite Others to Help
A logged in and verified Help.com member has the ability to setup a Friends List and invite others to help with posts.