what do you think of my poem?

Amelia-Mia

what do you think of my poem?

Lost and gone

I wish I could tell someone
but that can not be done
no words can explain
so quite ill remain
writing it is all i could do
no one will ever know,no one will ever have a clue
each day that passes by
i’m more and more lost inside
i dont know what happened to me..did she die?
what happened why did she go away and hide?
everything seems to be going well
but why inside do i feel like hell
people started to change
and they were happy i felt left out it didn’t feel the same
i wasn’t in control
i began to lose myself in another world
even though the past was behind
it catched up to me this time
all the past memories came back feelings,problems,drama
i felt bad and i knew what it was karma
im trying so hard to make things right
but the problem is i cant see it its …darker than the night
its all unclear
no one can see no one can hear
I don’t know or see where im going
im getting tired of not knowing
all i could do is ask why?
and out of no where for no reason i start to cry
is it to late?
i dont want to grow up with hate
i know i need help
but how all my life I’ve been helping others and myself
no one knows whats going on
no one knows somethings wrong
no one knows im lost im gone

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somewhereman 1 #
An Unknown Location | 4 years ago (4 minutes after post)

Wow…
Nice…

I’ve been trying to put something like that into words for so long…

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Amelia-Mia 1 #
An Unknown Location | 4 years ago (8 minutes after post)

thank you
what do you mean?its happening to you too?

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An Undisclosed Location | 4 years ago (8 minutes after post)

And into the fog we go…

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Amelia-Mia 1 #
An Unknown Location | 4 years ago (14 minutes after post)

thank you..and just write whats in your heart and if you do then its going to be great because it real and its coming from you

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somewhereman 1 #
An Unknown Location | 4 years ago (14 minutes after post)

Amelia-Mia wrote:
thank you
what do you mean?its happening to you too?

Well not a lots happening, so I guess I don’t know what you mean by that. I just really liked it cuz parts of it struck me (well know, the whole thing did) I guess my favorite part was:”i’m more and more lost inside
i dont know what happened to me..did she die?
what happened why did she go away and hide?
everything seems to be going well
but why inside do i feel like hell”

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STEEL 1 #
An Unknown Location | 4 years ago (16 minutes after post)

Mad

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Amelia-Mia 1 #
An Unknown Location | 4 years ago (24 minutes after post)

i meant it like do you feel the same way like being lost that somethings wrong but you just dont know what it is?
really thats my favorite part too
my little brother wanted to me to read it to him i didnt want too but i did
and like when i read it to him his lips started to quiver
he asked if thats how i felt but i changed the subject and said how do you feel about the poem and he said i felt it…

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somewhereman 1 #
An Unknown Location | 4 years ago (35 minutes after post)

Amelia-Mia wrote:
i meant it like do you feel the same way like being lost that somethings wrong but you just dont know what it is?
really thats my favorite part too
my little brother wanted to me to read it to him i didnt want too but i did
and like when i read it to him his lips started to quiver
he asked if thats how i felt but i changed the subject and said how do you feel about the poem and he said i felt it…

Yep, that would pretty much sum up exactly how I feel. I’ve always wondered if I was the only one that felt that way or if everyone felt like that and no one really says it. I’ve made so many posts on here, anon or not, reaching for some kind of basic problem in my life. Something I’m screwing up that no one else is. Some reason why I’m just, different. But I don’t really have a reason. So I’ll just stumble through my life with my head down wishing I could just be, i don’t know, carefree? or happy? I don’t really know…..

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somewhereman 1 #
An Unknown Location | 4 years ago (1 hour, 29 minutes after post)

jjlove wrote:
You mentioned being quite ill… Have you seen a doctor? Things always seem the bleakest when we are sick or in poor health.

“so quite ill remain” ?
I took that to mean
so quiet I’ll remain

But really? I never knew that. That’s actually really interesting

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somewhereman 1 #
An Unknown Location | 4 years ago (1 hour, 41 minutes after post)

tpo lol, nice job =) =P

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Amelia-Mia 1 #
An Unknown Location | 4 years ago (1 hour, 43 minutes after post)

lmao it was a typo lol

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