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I Die

I die slowly
It takes more than one hit
But I die
MortallyWounded
It’s snowing
I feel cold
Lifeless
Bury me in a snowbank
Life is cruel
Fate is deadly
The best things in life cannot be
Living hell
I’m alone
Lost and cold
Let the snow bury me

Rachel
Only you can warm me from this deathly cold
Without you
I die

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littlenick offline Verified User (1 year, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 126 #
An Undisclosed Location | 6 months, 2 weeks ago (0 minutes after post)

Sad. :(

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An Unknown Location | 6 months, 2 weeks ago (10 minutes after post)

Rachel (?!)
So much love I long to give you
When were together all is prefect
Yet now I’m lost, not knowing what to do
My love, dying here without you

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Eddieee offline Verified User (8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 100 #
An Unknown Location | 6 months, 2 weeks ago (12 minutes after post)

Yours…nicely said.

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linuxya offline Verified User (2 years, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 15 #
An Undisclosed Location | 6 months, 2 weeks ago (14 minutes after post)

Rescue fantasies?

Men are most attractive when they are doing the planning, acting, rescuing.

If you want to impress Rachael, then get out into the world and start being a man.

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MortallyWounded offline Verified User (1 year, 3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 124 #
An Unknown Location | 6 months, 2 weeks ago (16 minutes after post)

linuxya wrote:
Rescue fantasies?

Men are most attractive when they are doing the planning, acting, rescuing.

If you want to impress Rachael, then get out into the world and start being a man.

You do not understand. You missed the point. We were together………

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MortallyWounded offline Verified User (1 year, 3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 124 #
An Unknown Location | 6 months, 2 weeks ago (17 minutes after post)

She has already seen this poem, she understands the meaning.

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Eddieee offline Verified User (8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 100 #
An Unknown Location | 6 months, 2 weeks ago (29 minutes after post)

You rescue me
I’ll rescue you
In love
That is the truth..

linuxya wrote:
Rescue fantasies?

Men are most attractive when they are doing the planning, acting, rescuing.

If you want to impress Rachael, then get out into the world and start being a man.

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Miss Jessica Bunny offline Verified User (7 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 26 #
An Unknown Location | 6 months, 2 weeks ago (2 hours, 38 minutes after post)

Very sweet.

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beatricegalant offline Verified User (1 year, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 9 #
An Unknown Location | 6 months, 2 weeks ago (4 days, 4 hours after post)

If she saw this poem and understood the meaning, yet didn’t return, go after her. Talk to her, reason with her. Do you think there is a slight chance you may get back together again?

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live.or.die offline Verified User (6 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 6 months, 1 week ago (1 week, 2 days after post)

:(
mmm yeh that was sad

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jetmoo offline Verified User (2 years, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 31 #
An Undisclosed Location | 6 months ago (1 week, 4 days after post)

heart ache sucks. It really does. but believe it or not. If she doesn’t take you back. I think that you will still find someone. There are plenty fish in the sea. and when you least expect it, one of them is gonna jump out and bite yon on the nose. Alot of the nice fish are hidden though. you don’t find them until you look under the surface. well what I am saying is that sometimes it is hard to find the nice people, but it doesnt mean that they aren’t there. You’ll find another one, don’t worry. I think that when two break up once, then it begins a trail of getting back together and breaking up. and once you’ve been hurt it is harder to regain the trust again and it will never grow as strong. sometimes it’s better to leave things and find someone new. good luck, take care and keep hope

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rayemaye offline Verified User (5 months, 4 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 5 months, 3 weeks ago (3 weeks after post)

hey mort. This is a good piece. Feelings are different for everyone when breaking and making up. I-ronic the chicks name is rachel. I know a rachel.

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SELK offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months ago (1 month, 2 weeks after post)

brilliant

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MortallyWounded offline Verified User (1 year, 3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 124 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months ago (1 month, 2 weeks after post)

Thanks! :)

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littlenick offline Verified User (1 year, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 126 #
An Undisclosed Location | 5 months ago (1 month, 2 weeks after post)

Sad, still.

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An Unknown Location | 3 weeks, 6 days ago (5 months, 2 weeks after post)

itoo think it is sad .
liked what you ewre saying, and than , to discover it is all cause of a girl… very disappointing.
broken hart is very childish… love her- i can get , die without her- i cant understand.

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£üVяЭя♥GųRl offline Verified User (1 year, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 26 #
An Unknown Location | 3 weeks ago (5 months, 3 weeks after post)

so sad…is rachel ur gf or something? wife?
SAD

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MortallyWounded offline Verified User (1 year, 3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 124 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 6 days ago (5 months, 3 weeks after post)

luvergurl_14 wrote:
so sad…is rachel ur gf or something? wife?
SAD

Yeah… GF

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bri8br offline Verified User (9 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 6 days ago (5 months, 4 weeks after post)

Very sad but very good. I hope things get better!

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MortallyWounded offline Verified User (1 year, 3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 124 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 6 days ago (5 months, 4 weeks after post)

bri8br wrote:
Very sad but very good. I hope things get better!

I’m okay for now.

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£üVяЭя♥GųRl offline Verified User (1 year, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 26 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 4 days ago (5 months, 4 weeks after post)

wat happened?
BF

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MortallyWounded offline Verified User (1 year, 3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 124 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 4 days ago (5 months, 4 weeks after post)

Long story.. Its in the past now, I’m okay.

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£üVяЭя♥GųRl offline Verified User (1 year, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 26 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 3 days ago (6 months after post)

give me a hint

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MortallyWounded offline Verified User (1 year, 3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 124 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 3 days ago (6 months after post)

Internet relationship.

Why do you want to know?

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£üVяЭя♥GųRl offline Verified User (1 year, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 26 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 3 days ago (6 months after post)

because wat ur talking about is sad…so i just wanted to know excatly what ur talkin bout, is that a crime? *sniff* :,{
jk

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MortallyWounded offline Verified User (1 year, 3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 124 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 3 days ago (6 months after post)

lol

Yeah, she and I got very emotionally connected to each other over the net, then we needed to break it up.

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