I Die
I die slowly
It takes more than one hit
But I die
MortallyWounded
It’s snowing
I feel cold
Lifeless
Bury me in a snowbank
Life is cruel
Fate is deadly
The best things in life cannot be
Living hell
I’m alone
Lost and cold
Let the snow bury me
Rachel
Only you can warm me from this deathly cold
Without you
I die
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Rachel (?!)
So much love I long to give you
When were together all is prefect
Yet now I’m lost, not knowing what to do
My love, dying here without you
Rescue fantasies?
Men are most attractive when they are doing the planning, acting, rescuing.
If you want to impress Rachael, then get out into the world and start being a man.
linuxya wrote:
Rescue fantasies?Men are most attractive when they are doing the planning, acting, rescuing.
If you want to impress Rachael, then get out into the world and start being a man.
You do not understand. You missed the point. We were together………
You rescue me
I’ll rescue you
In love
That is the truth..
linuxya wrote:
Rescue fantasies?Men are most attractive when they are doing the planning, acting, rescuing.
If you want to impress Rachael, then get out into the world and start being a man.
An Unknown Location | 6 months, 2 weeks ago (2 hours, 38 minutes after post)
Very sweet.
If she saw this poem and understood the meaning, yet didn’t return, go after her. Talk to her, reason with her. Do you think there is a slight chance you may get back together again?
:(
mmm yeh that was sad
heart ache sucks. It really does. but believe it or not. If she doesn’t take you back. I think that you will still find someone. There are plenty fish in the sea. and when you least expect it, one of them is gonna jump out and bite yon on the nose. Alot of the nice fish are hidden though. you don’t find them until you look under the surface. well what I am saying is that sometimes it is hard to find the nice people, but it doesnt mean that they aren’t there. You’ll find another one, don’t worry. I think that when two break up once, then it begins a trail of getting back together and breaking up. and once you’ve been hurt it is harder to regain the trust again and it will never grow as strong. sometimes it’s better to leave things and find someone new. good luck, take care and keep hope
hey mort. This is a good piece. Feelings are different for everyone when breaking and making up. I-ronic the chicks name is rachel. I know a rachel.
brilliant
itoo think it is sad .
liked what you ewre saying, and than , to discover it is all cause of a girl… very disappointing.
broken hart is very childish… love her- i can get , die without her- i cant understand.
luvergurl_14 wrote:
so sad…is rachel ur gf or something? wife?
SAD
Yeah… GF
bri8br wrote:
Very sad but very good. I hope things get better!
I’m okay for now.
because wat ur talking about is sad…so i just wanted to know excatly what ur talkin bout, is that a crime? *sniff* :,{
jk
lol
Yeah, she and I got very emotionally connected to each other over the net, then we needed to break it up.
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