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One smart kid, One horrible world.

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Her hair was up in a pony tail,
her favorite dress tied with a bow.
Today was Daddy’s Day at school,
and she couldn’t wait to go.

But her mommy tried to tell her,
that she probably should stay home.
Why the kids might not understand,
if she went to school alone.

But she was not afraid; she knew just what to say.
What to tell her classmates of why he wasn’t there today.
But still her mother worried,
for her to face this day alone.

And that was why once again,
she tried to keep her daughter home.
But the little girl went to school
eager to tell them all.

About a dad she never sees;
a dad who never calls.
There were daddies along the wall in back, for everyone to meet.
Children squirming impatiently,

anxious in their seats
One by one the teacher called a student from the class.
To introduce their daddy, as seconds slowly passed.
At last the teacher called her name,

every child turned to stare.
Each of them was searching,
for a man who wasn’t there.
“Where’s her daddy at?”

she heard a boy call out.
“She probably doesn’t have one,”
another student dared to shout.
And from somewhere near the back,
she heard a daddy say,
“Looks like another deadbeat dad,
too busy to waste his day.”

The words did not offend her,
as she smiled up at her Mom.
And looked back at her teacher,
who told her to go on.

And with hands behind her back,
slowly she began to speak.
And out from the mouth of a child,
came words incredibly unique.

“My Daddy couldn’t be here,
because he lives so far away.
But I know he wishes he could be,
since this is such a special day.

And though you cannot meet him,
I wanted you to know.
All about my daddy,
and how much he loves me so.

He loved to tell me stories
he taught me to ride my bike.
He surprised me with pink roses,
and taught me to fly a kite.

We used to share fudge sundaes,
and ice cream in a cone.
And though you cannot see him.
I’m not standing here alone.

“Cause my daddy’s always with me,
even though we are apart
I know because he told me,
he’ll forever be in my heart”

With that, her little hand reached up,
and lay across her chest.
Feeling her own heartbeat,
beneath her favourite dress.

And from somewhere here in the crowd of dads, her mother stood in tears.
Proudly watching her daughter,
who was wise beyond her years.

For she stood up for the love
of a man not in her life.
Doing what was best for her,
doing what was right.

And when she dropped her hand back down,
staring straight into the crowd.
She finished with a voice so soft,
but its message clear and loud.

“I love my daddy very much,
he’s my shining star.
And if he could, he’d be here,
but heaven’s just too far

You see he was a fire-fighter
and died just this past year
When airplanes hit the towers
and taught Americans to fear.

But sometimes when I close my eyes,
it’s like he never went away.”
And then she closed her eyes,
and she saw him there that day.

And to her mothers amazement,
she witnessed with surprise
A room full of daddies and children,
all starting to close their eyes.

Who knows what they saw before them,
who knows what they felt inside.
Perhaps for merely a second,
they saw him at her side.

“I know you’re with me Daddy,”
to the silence she called out.
And what happened next made believers,
of those once filled with doubt.

Not one in that room could explain it,
for each of their eyes had been closed.
But there on the desk beside her,
was a fragrant long-stemmed pink rose.

And a child was blessed, if only for a moment,
by the love of her shining star.
And given the gift of believing,
that heaven is never too far.

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6 months, 3 weeks ago (9 minutes after post)

well done!

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An Unknown Location | 6 months, 3 weeks ago (11 minutes after post)

That’s beautiful. :) Thanks for posting that.

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An Unknown Location | 6 months, 3 weeks ago (16 minutes after post)

Did you write that? If you did it was awesome and amazing. I almost cried. Just be careful about posting things you write on here.

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An Unknown Location | 6 months, 3 weeks ago (27 minutes after post)

I think I’ve read something similar to that before, or maybe it was just a slight alternative of this same one, I’m not sure. It’s got a strong message to it. It’s a real heart breaker. Really makes you understand. :)

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GB | 6 months, 3 weeks ago (30 minutes after post)

that is beautiful..im now crying..*very touching*

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An Unknown Location | 6 months, 3 weeks ago (54 minutes after post)

I don’t usually like stuff like this, but this one got me. Thanks for sharing.

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An Undisclosed Location | 6 months, 3 weeks ago (55 minutes after post)

It’s great! But I’ve read it before so I presume it’s not your own writings! But still, great poem.

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An Unknown Location | 6 months, 3 weeks ago (56 minutes after post)

Its not mine, i found it… it touched me so i wanted to share it

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An Undisclosed Location | 6 months, 3 weeks ago (56 minutes after post)

thanks!

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An Unknown Location | 6 months, 3 weeks ago (1 hour, 15 minutes after post)

wow that was great, so beautiful. I actually cried a little.
Thank you for sharing it =)

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An Unknown Location | 6 months, 3 weeks ago (1 hour, 45 minutes after post)

oh wow. that is such a sweet sad thing D’:

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An Undisclosed Location | 6 months, 3 weeks ago (1 hour, 47 minutes after post)

it’s beautiful, absolutely beautiful.

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An Unknown Location | 6 months, 3 weeks ago (2 hours, 52 minutes after post)

Magic, pure & simple. Thanks I needed that :)

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An Unknown Location | 6 months, 3 weeks ago (3 hours, 38 minutes after post)

one of best touched one
thx

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An Unknown Location | 6 months, 3 weeks ago (6 hours, 5 minutes after post)

that’s very nice

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An Undisclosed Location | 6 months, 3 weeks ago (8 hours, 10 minutes after post)

Twist ending caught me off guard.

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An Undisclosed Location | 6 months, 3 weeks ago (9 hours, 46 minutes after post)

Wow. This is amazingg.

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An Unknown Location | 6 months, 3 weeks ago (2 days, 7 hours after post)

wow, too much time can be good. =D

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An Unknown Location | 6 months, 3 weeks ago (2 days, 7 hours after post)

STEELSLEEPING wrote:
wow, too much time can be good. =D

huh? what that mean??

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An Unknown Location | 6 months, 2 weeks ago (3 days after post)

yeah. pls explain?

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An Unknown Location | 6 months, 2 weeks ago (3 days, 7 hours after post)

you found it, on the net i presume, so you must have been bored

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An Unknown Location | 6 months, 2 weeks ago (3 days, 8 hours after post)

STE3LDEAD wrote:
you found it, on the net i presume, so you must have been bored

Look! You just found it on the net! Are you bored?

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