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Would anyone like to read something I wrote a while ago?

It’s just alittle poem.
If i remember rightly it’s a sonnet. It’s quite short and simple

The beautiful little tears roll,
his time for freedom has now come,
we’ll come familiar with this soul,
our suppressed happiness now undone,

His sparrkling eyes shining so clear,
his soft skin and tiny toes,
your mammy hugs you, she is here,
your innocent smile that God has sewn.

We love everything about you,
and what you will grow to be,
from something small, like a seed to a tree.

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Eddieee offline Verified User (8 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 624 #
An Unknown Location | 6 months, 1 week ago (2 minutes after post)

:)

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C. S. offline Verified User (6 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 5 #
An Unknown Location | 6 months, 1 week ago (6 minutes after post)

cute, I like it. :-D

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jetmoo offline Verified User (2 years, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 57 #
An Undisclosed Location | 6 months, 1 week ago (15 minutes after post)

thank you :) I wrote it before my little nephew was born. He’s really cute.

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littlenick offline Verified User (1 year, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 155 #
An Undisclosed Location | 6 months, 1 week ago (26 minutes after post)

More?

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jetmoo offline Verified User (2 years, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 57 #
An Undisclosed Location | 6 months, 1 week ago (13 hours, 30 minutes after post)

oh its just short. sonnets ARE short, aren’t they? can’t remember lol I think if it were any longer it might not be a sonnet anymore.

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Kally offline Verified User (8 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 10 #
An Unknown Location | 6 months, 1 week ago (14 hours, 10 minutes after post)

nice :)

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alinaxumai offline Verified User (11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 6 months ago (1 week, 1 day after post)

I love it. It’s beautiful

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coffee.obses offline Verified User (6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 6 months ago (1 week, 2 days after post)

that is really gorgeous :)
I love idea of the smile having been sewn, its very creative

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buddharbelly offline Verified User (6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 6 months ago (1 week, 3 days after post)

sonnets have 10 syllables per line 5 up and 5 down
and a sonnet has 14 lines, 6 in one verse, 6 in another and then it ends with two more lines.
its still cute though. :]

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turner.bell offline Verified User (5 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months ago (1 month, 1 week after post)

Oh, jetmoo!!!! That was wonderful :D it brought happy tears to my eyes!! That’s such an adorable, well-written poem. Gave me little excited goosebumps :)

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littlenick offline Verified User (1 year, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 155 #
An Undisclosed Location | 5 months ago (1 month, 1 week after post)

Any more?

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