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An Undisclosed Location | 5 months, 4 weeks ago (35 minutes after post)

all the colors turn to gray
her happiness has fade away
she cuddles deep within her sorrow
she knows he’d lie to them tomorrow

between the two is storming silence
her mind is far to ease the violence
he doesn’t care for how it feels
she’ll have to live with what there is

she walks alive, within she is dead
he’s not her father - just her dad.

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An Unknown Location | 5 months, 4 weeks ago (1 hour, 40 minutes after post)

you’ve got the rhyme scheme you mentioned already, all you need is to fix the last verse so life ends line 1, father ends line 2, knife ends line 3, and a word that rhymes with father ends line 4. try rhymezone.com for rhymes.

(or use dad instead of father, there are more rhymes.

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An Undisclosed Location | 5 months, 4 weeks ago (2 hours, 7 minutes after post)

if you want something to rhyme properly,
you need the lines to have the same weight,
and for the ends to end with the same letters rather than the same sound.
because it doesn’t sound quite right for example “door” and “dinosaur”
it rhymes, but, not perfectly.

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Anonymous edited this post 5 months, 4 weeks ago. Read the previous text »

i need to take this poem and make a rhyme scheme for it. like abab cdcd efef ghgh help!!!

When everything fades to gray
in such a colorful world
all happiness goes away
when it happens to such a nice girl

all she wants to do is cry
curl up in a ball and die
no matter how hard she tries
everything he says is a lie

silence is now between the two
she acts like she isnt aware
she knows she has to make do
even though he doesnt care

she stopped living her life
all she really wanted was a knife
but thats what happens when your dad is no longer a father

(i know the last stanza is bad….please help me!!!!)

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Anonymous edited this post 5 months, 4 weeks ago. Read the previous text »

i need to take this poem and make a rhyme scheme for it. like abab cdcd efef ghgh help!!!

When everything fades to gray
in such a colorful world
all happiness goes away
when it happens to such a nice girl

all she wants to do is cry
curl up in a ball and die
no matter how hard she tries
everything he says is a lie

silence is now between the two
she acts like she isnt aware
she knows she has to make do
even though he doesnt care

she stopped living her life
all she really wanted was a knife
but thats what happens when your dad is no longer a father

(i know the last stanza is bad….please help me!!!!)

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