Love help: What went wrong?

Eddieee

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What went wrong?

Broken and lonely
Don’t treat me bad
This heart is empty
This heart is sad

Nothing left
All is lost
All is gone
To high this cost

This heart is gone
Don’t know what I did
I guess it was bad
I guess I was wrong

No coming back this time
I can’t seem to clear my mind
I guess I was bad
I was somehow wrong…

This is tearing through my soul
What did I do that was so…
Bad
So wrong

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Since writing this post Eddieee has helped in 12 other users' posts within the last 4 days. Eddieee is a verified member, has been around for 7 months, 1 week and has 164 posts and 2,260 replies to their name.

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Dr. Ralph's Beard 74 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 1 week ago (36 minutes after post)

Poetry.com is beginning to get on my nerves…

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Eddieee 555 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 1 week ago (45 minutes after post)

May I suggest you check my tags. Should give you a clue if you wish not to read..

Dr. Ralph wrote:
Poetry.com is beginning to get on my nerves…

Help me with: Your Eyes

Barbyman 6 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 1 week ago (1 hour, 50 minutes after post)

Love it ,not long enough to make me sad .But i save things what makes me read it.Thanks its yours,that is what its all about…

Help me with: Just recently i came back from Japan after staying a Week.On one occasion we stayed in the Red Light District in Tokyo.Something

Eddieee 555 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 1 week ago (1 hour, 53 minutes after post)

I wish it wasn’t mine.. I don’t wish you to be sad. Thank you for reading and commenting. :)

Barbyman wrote:
Love it ,not long enough to make me sad .But i save things what makes me read it.Thanks its yours,that is what its all about…

Help me with: Your Eyes

falling 5 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 1 week ago (3 hours, 49 minutes after post)

wow eddiie u sound like me lol.

so how can I help u?

Help me with: I’m so sick of this.

SpazzySpizzy 21 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 1 week ago (3 hours, 50 minutes after post)

amazing as usual eddieee.really sad though.i hope you feel better soon.

Help me with: You guys mean the world to me.

Eddieee 555 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 1 week ago (3 hours, 51 minutes after post)

Sound like you? How so?

falling wrote:
wow eddiie u sound like me lol.

so how can I help u?

Help me with: Your Eyes

falling 5 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 1 week ago (3 hours, 55 minutes after post)

some stuff I’ve written sounds a lot like this. its not poetry, I don’t really write poetry, but its written in a poem kind of style I guess you’d say.

do you feel like this is able to capture ur feelings acurately, or is it just so insufficient?

Help me with: I’m so sick of this.

Eddieee 555 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 1 week ago (4 hours, 1 minute after post)

Thank you for this kindness. Lets hope for all of the lost souls…to be better someday.

SpazzySpizzy wrote:
amazing as usual eddieee.really sad though.i hope you feel better soon.

Help me with: Your Eyes

Eddieee 555 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 1 week ago (4 hours, 2 minutes after post)

To little..too late. Will you share something of yours?

falling wrote:
some stuff I’ve written sounds a lot like this. its not poetry, I don’t really write poetry, but its written in a poem kind of style I guess you’d say.

do you feel like this is able to capture ur feelings acurately, or is it just so insufficient?

Help me with: Your Eyes

falling 5 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 1 week ago (4 hours, 11 minutes after post)

what did I say
what did I do
fear grips my heart
o god
what have I done now?

it doesn’t seem real
two different lives I seem to live
two different realities u see
two different people I seem to be
why can’t u see the real me inside
this is just a façade

why are words so unsufficient
I pour out my soul
but things are still left unsaid, but not forgotten by me
trying to perfect it
I leave out things
things
I don’t admit
ever.

just some random thoughts that came to me, lol

Help me with: I’m so sick of this.

Eddieee 555 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 1 week ago (4 hours, 17 minutes after post)

Very nice..I see what you mean..we are not seen or heard…

falling wrote:
what did I say
what did I do
fear grips my heart
o god
what have I done now?

it doesn’t seem real
two different lives I seem to live
two different realities u see
two different people I seem to be
why can’t u see the real me inside
this is just a façade

why are words so unsufficient
I pour out my soul
but things are still left unsaid, but not forgotten by me
trying to perfect it
I leave out things
things
I don’t admit
ever.

just some random thoughts that came to me, lol

Help me with: Your Eyes

SpazzySpizzy 21 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 1 week ago (4 hours, 39 minutes after post)

wow,falling.thats really good.i definitely relate.

Help me with: You guys mean the world to me.

falling 5 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 1 week ago (4 hours, 48 minutes after post)

let the thundering roar come
and drown everything else out
cuz I don’t wanna hear you anymore
all these voices in my head
all these broken thoughts
the pain
the shame
just make it all go away
I want to run far away
I want to end it all
just make it stop
let me get off
this ride
I just keep walking, falling towards my ruin
sliding down that slippery slope
not even knowing what I’m doing
pounding
pounding
pounding
in my head
everything is in slow motion
can’t even think a complete sentence can’t even finish a single thought but one
no
words
left

only
this

(just a little inspiration I had, didn’t mean to write a novel lol! but hey, thanks eddiee and spazzyspizzy.)

Help me with: I’m so sick of this.

Eddieee 555 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 1 week ago (1 day, 15 hours after post)

No, thank you!!! You wrote how I feel..I understand not wishing to hear anymore…Can’t run away, can’t get off, can’t make it stop……

falling wrote:
let the thundering roar come
and drown everything else out
cuz I don’t wanna hear you anymore
all these voices in my head
all these broken thoughts
the pain
the shame
just make it all go away
I want to run far away
I want to end it all
just make it stop
let me get off
this ride
I just keep walking, falling towards my ruin
sliding down that slippery slope
not even knowing what I’m doing
pounding
pounding
pounding
in my head
everything is in slow motion
can’t even think a complete sentence can’t even finish a single thought but one
no
words
left

only
this

(just a little inspiration I had, didn’t mean to write a novel lol! but hey, thanks eddiee and spazzyspizzy.)

Help me with: Your Eyes

falling 5 #
An Unknown Location | 4 months, 3 weeks ago (2 weeks after post)

yeah exactly eddieee

Help me with: I’m so sick of this.

}Fållęn{ 126 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months, 2 weeks ago (1 month, 2 weeks after post)

:) i liked it

Help me with: So this is goodbye.

Eddieee 555 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months, 2 weeks ago (1 month, 2 weeks after post)

Thanks :)

~*M&M*~ wrote:
:) i liked it

Help me with: Your Eyes

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