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tell me how i should finish this story, please its for homework.

about 5 years ago me and my friends, charlie ,rea, alex and tom. we were walking home from the
shop. it was dark . we took a short cut to my house.down a small road. a car came speeding towards
us .it was going so fast we all jumped into the bushes.then as if by magic the car vanished.and so did
alex , rea and tom. me and charlie was scared.we ran the rest of the way.it was getting darker.we got home
and………
how should i finish it
please help

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Bella. offline Verified User (1 year) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 5 months, 3 weeks ago (5 minutes after post)

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Kanabi offline Verified User (1 year, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 5 months, 3 weeks ago (10 minutes after post)

well, for starters, you have alot of broken and incomplete sentences. Second, end how you think. Try out different ending ideas, the car appeared out of no where and ran them over, they found their friends…etc etc.,

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