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The grave

This heart is stuck
I am just too tired to dig it up
I’ll leave it in this shallow grave
Blamed upon bad luck..

Love walks out
I walk in
Home is now a place
I can’t remember living in

Without you there I’m now so all alone
All these memories, better left unsaid
Now I am here reaping what’s been sown
This once hopeful future full of dread

This heart has gone
No point to dig it up
I’ll leave it in this shallow grave
Blamed upon bad luck..

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meg_ryan offline Verified User (6 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 20 Add Friend #
An Undisclosed Location | 5 months, 3 weeks ago (2 minutes after post)

heart braking but WONDERFUL!!!! its very good

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Proff. Vampress ;p offline Verified User (9 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 36 Add Friend #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 3 weeks ago (10 minutes after post)

very good! but if i were u i’d use a bit more puntuntuatio

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SpazzySpizzy offline Verified User (7 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 39 Add Friend #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 3 weeks ago (12 minutes after post)

absolutely beautiful.

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Eddieee offline Verified User (8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 99 Add Friend #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 3 weeks ago (15 minutes after post)

:)You are too kind.

meg_ryan wrote:
heart braking but WONDERFUL!!!! its very good

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Eddieee offline Verified User (8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 99 Add Friend #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 3 weeks ago (16 minutes after post)

Works for me, Thanks

vampress;p wrote:
very good! but if i were u i’d use a bit more puntuntuatio

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Proff. Vampress ;p offline Verified User (9 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 36 Add Friend #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 3 weeks ago (24 minutes after post)

Eddieee wrote:
Works for me, Thanks

vampress;p wrote:
very good! but if i were u i’d use a bit more puntuntuatio

constructive crititisium! the best kind, but it is still really good, we are doin poetry in english so i have learned alot

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Eddieee offline Verified User (8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 99 Add Friend #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 3 weeks ago (26 minutes after post)

Yes, You are right :)

vampress;p wrote:

Eddieee wrote:
Works for me, Thanks

vampress;p wrote:
very good! but if i were u i’d use a bit more puntuntuatio

constructive crititisium! the best kind, but it is still really good, we are doin poetry in english so i have learned alot

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Eddieee offline Verified User (8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 99 Add Friend #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 3 weeks ago (26 minutes after post)

As always, Thank you friend :)

SpazzySpizzy wrote:
absolutely beautiful.

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Proff. Vampress ;p offline Verified User (9 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 36 Add Friend #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 3 weeks ago (28 minutes after post)

Eddieee wrote:
Yes, You are right :)

vampress;p wrote:

Eddieee wrote:
Works for me, Thanks

vampress;p wrote:
very good! but if i were u i’d use a bit more puntuntuatio

constructive crititisium! the best kind, but it is still really good, we are doin poetry in english so i have learned alot

u should write some more!

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Eddieee offline Verified User (8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 99 Add Friend #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 3 weeks ago (31 minutes after post)

I can manage that :)

vampress;p wrote:

Eddieee wrote:
Yes, You are right :)

vampress;p wrote:

Eddieee wrote:
Works for me, Thanks

vampress;p wrote:
very good! but if i were u i’d use a bit more puntuntuatio

constructive crititisium! the best kind, but it is still really good, we are doin poetry in english so i have learned alot

u should write some more!

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Proff. Vampress ;p offline Verified User (9 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 36 Add Friend #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 3 weeks ago (33 minutes after post)

Eddieee wrote:
I can manage that :)

vampress;p wrote:

Eddieee wrote:
Yes, You are right :)

vampress;p wrote:

Eddieee wrote:
Works for me, Thanks

vampress;p wrote:
very good! but if i were u i’d use a bit more puntuntuatio

constructive crititisium! the best kind, but it is still really good, we are doin poetry in english so i have learned alot

u should write some more!

i wright poetry when im bored or when something really weitrd happens…..we had to write a reply to a poem for english, took me 5mins cause for no reason what so eva i had the word falling ou my pen, if u know what i mean

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Eddieee offline Verified User (8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 99 Add Friend #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 3 weeks ago (35 minutes after post)

Yes I do. Sometimes, can’t get it donw fast enough.
quote vampress;p]

Eddieee wrote:
I can manage that :)

vampress;p wrote:

Eddieee wrote:
Yes, You are right :)

vampress;p wrote:

Eddieee wrote:
Works for me, Thanks

vampress;p wrote:
very good! but if i were u i’d use a bit more puntuntuatio

constructive crititisium! the best kind, but it is still really good, we are doin poetry in english so i have learned alot

u should write some more!

i wright poetry when im bored or when something really weitrd happens…..we had to write a reply to a poem for english, took me 5mins cause for no reason what so eva i had the word falling ou my pen, if u know what i mean[/quote]

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Proff. Vampress ;p offline Verified User (9 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 36 Add Friend #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 3 weeks ago (41 minutes after post)

Eddieee wrote:
Yes I do. Sometimes, can’t get it donw fast enough.
quote vampress;p]

Eddieee wrote:
I can manage that :)

vampress;p wrote:

Eddieee wrote:
Yes, You are right :)

vampress;p wrote:

Eddieee wrote:
Works for me, Thanks

vampress;p wrote:
very good! but if i were u i’d use a bit more puntuntuatio

constructive crititisium! the best kind, but it is still really good, we are doin poetry in english so i have learned alot

u should write some more!

i wright poetry when im bored or when something really weitrd happens…..we had to write a reply to a poem for english, took me 5mins cause for no reason what so eva i had the word falling ou my pen, if u know what i mean

[/quote]

lol same!

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Eddieee offline Verified User (8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 99 Add Friend #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 3 weeks ago (47 minutes after post)

Z, Have any to share?

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