heart braking but WONDERFUL!!!! its very good
very good! but if i were u i’d use a bit more puntuntuatio
:)You are too kind.
meg_ryan wrote:
heart braking but WONDERFUL!!!! its very good
Works for me, Thanks
vampress;p wrote:
very good! but if i were u i’d use a bit more puntuntuatio
Eddieee wrote:
Works for me, Thanks
vampress;p wrote:
very good! but if i were u i’d use a bit more puntuntuatio
constructive crititisium! the best kind, but it is still really good, we are doin poetry in english so i have learned alot
Yes, You are right :)
vampress;p wrote:
Eddieee wrote:
Works for me, Thanks
vampress;p wrote:
very good! but if i were u i’d use a bit more puntuntuatio
constructive crititisium! the best kind, but it is still really good, we are doin poetry in english so i have learned alot
As always, Thank you friend :)
SpazzySpizzy wrote:
absolutely beautiful.
Eddieee wrote:
Yes, You are right :)
vampress;p wrote:
Eddieee wrote:
Works for me, Thanks
vampress;p wrote:
very good! but if i were u i’d use a bit more puntuntuatio
constructive crititisium! the best kind, but it is still really good, we are doin poetry in english so i have learned alot
u should write some more!
I can manage that :)
vampress;p wrote:
Eddieee wrote:
Yes, You are right :)
vampress;p wrote:
Eddieee wrote:
Works for me, Thanks
vampress;p wrote:
very good! but if i were u i’d use a bit more puntuntuatio
constructive crititisium! the best kind, but it is still really good, we are doin poetry in english so i have learned alot
u should write some more!
Eddieee wrote:
I can manage that :)
vampress;p wrote:
Eddieee wrote:
Yes, You are right :)
vampress;p wrote:
Eddieee wrote:
Works for me, Thanks
vampress;p wrote:
very good! but if i were u i’d use a bit more puntuntuatio
constructive crititisium! the best kind, but it is still really good, we are doin poetry in english so i have learned alot
u should write some more!
i wright poetry when im bored or when something really weitrd happens…..we had to write a reply to a poem for english, took me 5mins cause for no reason what so eva i had the word falling ou my pen, if u know what i mean
Yes I do. Sometimes, can’t get it donw fast enough.
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Eddieee wrote:
I can manage that :)
vampress;p wrote:
Eddieee wrote:
Yes, You are right :)
vampress;p wrote:
Eddieee wrote:
Works for me, Thanks
vampress;p wrote:
very good! but if i were u i’d use a bit more puntuntuatio
constructive crititisium! the best kind, but it is still really good, we are doin poetry in english so i have learned alot
u should write some more!
i wright poetry when im bored or when something really weitrd happens…..we had to write a reply to a poem for english, took me 5mins cause for no reason what so eva i had the word falling ou my pen, if u know what i mean[/quote]
Eddieee wrote:
Yes I do. Sometimes, can’t get it donw fast enough.
quote vampress;p]
Eddieee wrote:
I can manage that :)
vampress;p wrote:
Eddieee wrote:
Yes, You are right :)
vampress;p wrote:
Eddieee wrote:
Works for me, Thanks
vampress;p wrote:
very good! but if i were u i’d use a bit more puntuntuatio
constructive crititisium! the best kind, but it is still really good, we are doin poetry in english so i have learned alot
u should write some more!
i wright poetry when im bored or when something really weitrd happens…..we had to write a reply to a poem for english, took me 5mins cause for no reason what so eva i had the word falling ou my pen, if u know what i mean
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lol same!
meg_ryan
Proff. Vampress ;p
SpazzySpizzy