Love help: Well, I’m writing this story…

ashlov7

Well, I’m writing this story…

and I’ve come to a part where the two characters kiss. I don’t really know how to write that part. I need some help!!!
The last couple sentances I wrote were:

Adam looked around first to make sure no one was looking.
I’m waiting… She said
Adam suddenly jolted towards her…

Thats the part where I get stuck!!! UGH!!! I don’t know what to write! someone please help me! I reallly want to get this story moving, so… I need an idea!

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lostinthisworl #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 2 weeks ago (10 minutes after post)

Adam looked around first to make sure no one was looking.
I’m waiting… She said
Adam suddenly jolted towards her…

… and gave her some liplock?

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ashlov7 4 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 2 weeks ago (12 minutes after post)

lostinthisworl wrote:
Adam looked around first to make sure no one was looking.
I’m waiting… She said
Adam suddenly jolted towards her…

… and gave her some liplock?

Well, I’d want it to be a little more described than that, but I just want to get the kiss done. Its killing me cuz I’ve got no way to describe it.

Help me with: Im terrible at making decisions..

lostinthisworl #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 2 weeks ago (13 minutes after post)

…and challenged her tongue to fight his tongue in the World Tongue Wrestling Championship?

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ashlov7 4 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 2 weeks ago (19 minutes after post)

Uh… It’s the first kiss… I don’t know if that’ll happen

Help me with: Im terrible at making decisions..

lostinthisworl #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 2 weeks ago (22 minutes after post)

Adam looked around first to make sure no one was looking.
I’m waiting… She said
Adam suddenly jolted towards her…

…and he found himself almost touching his face with his lips and his lips were so close to her that he felt her warm breath against his face. And without really thinking, and closing his eyes, rubbed his soft lips against her soft and tender lips and it gave him immense joy! It gave him the joy of a little boy running through a park just being able to imagine himself in flight and far above from the earth.

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ashlov7 4 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 2 weeks ago (25 minutes after post)

That’s wonderful!!! Thankyou sooooooooooooooooooo much!! You just got me out of my writers block!!! YES!!! :D ur the best!!!

Help me with: Im terrible at making decisions..

britishlovrr;p 1 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 2 weeks ago (38 minutes after post)

are you going to post this stopry anywhere cuz im interested! its sound good

Help me with: ok so i have this choice.

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