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Once, it called.

In a dark and damp labyrinth I seek, finding but not searching. Soon these haloed meteors will pierce this frame and reel, dragging me to the devil’s carnival. Under the diode injected canvas is where the shallow pool will reach its deepest and where you can cry forever over forgotten skeletons of vine and steel. Weld our flesh to fly with sentient wings, they yell, and we’ll be swooned together. Yet from this bitter bed, no one wakes. Cast to an extinguished sun, two eyes are a hazy home to my bones, tiered with golden blood, but blind. Can you see how the man makes the darkness, misshapen like sprites on boiling candies? Can you hear what they say? Can you hear the song of my heart? It writes that, and it writes this. The eraser swept knoll lies guest for the final piece, but a tiny ripple in the diffident bath as that firefly flock dawns. And as the opportune flood crests, down the lead pipeline I go. Euthanize me behind an iron curtain; it pleases me so to galvanize the melding on this keeping metal floor. Free at last in fear of friend and father, you hear the final notes, chiming tiredly through the wall. Who has it cooed for? Who, who?

– It’s been awhile, but inspiration is a strange thing. Had to jump out of the shower and jot this one down with a mascara pencil on the bottom of a tissue box. :-)

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Lakittyla offline Verified User (5 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 3 years, 11 months ago (22 minutes after post)

I was intrigued by this…So I just had to ask! What is a mascara pencil???

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Mr. P offline Verified User (4 years, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 years, 11 months ago (24 minutes after post)

PollyinLove wrote:
I was intrigued by this…So I just had to ask! What is a mascara pencil???

FML it’s eyeliner lmao.

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Zal93 offline Unverified User #
An Unknown Location | 3 years, 11 months ago (1 day, 23 hours after post)

i’d reccomend an art class to desplay these feelings in pictures rather than words, or you can desplay them in words AND pictures

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3 years, 10 months ago (3 weeks, 5 days after post)

That was good. Very deep, you should contact a publisher. Good luck!

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baucom197 offline Verified User (3 years, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 3 years, 10 months ago (1 month after post)

The poem is good, but you mentioned the devil. Do you believe in the Devil b/c you don’t belive in God. If so, can you explain?

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Mr. P offline Verified User (4 years, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 years, 10 months ago (1 month after post)

baucom197 wrote:
The poem is good, but you mentioned the devil. Do you believe in the Devil b/c you don’t belive in God. If so, can you explain?

It’s an allegory; it’s poetic.

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mzcatz offline Verified User (3 years, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 3 years, 10 months ago (1 month after post)

Great words, easy to visualize!

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An Unknown Location | 3 years, 9 months ago (1 month, 1 week after post)

Very good.

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riemann offline Verified User (3 years, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 5 #
An Unknown Location | 3 years, 9 months ago (1 month, 2 weeks after post)

It is highly vivid in detail and imagery. It was wonderful to read, but I am missing the meaning behind the poem, quite possibly because I’m not good with poetry in the first place.

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Mr.X offline Unverified User #
An Unknown Location | 3 years, 9 months ago (2 months, 1 week after post)

very facinating. this has given me a lot to think about.

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