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Something I wrote last night.

I was feeling…odd… It’s complicated…

Hidden beneath the holy grail
You’ll find a girl so weak and frail
There she’ll live forever more
Oblivious to the danger that lies in store
She waits for a boy she knows will come
To wake her up, she is so numb
Her heart is freezing, her hands are cold
Her story is one she hopes never to be told
For 20 years she lies and waits
For the man she both loves and hates
He will come, she knows he will
But until then, time stands still
A single rose placed on her breast
Returns the cadence of her chest
She opens her eyes and there he stands
The fairytale man her heart demands
A silent kiss and whispered words
He wisks her away through the calls of birds
Into the dusk he takes her away
She hopes they will return one day
To share the memories of this day past
The day her suffering ends at last.

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[think peace] offline Verified User (2 years, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
Atlanta, GA, US | 5 months, 1 week ago (4 minutes after post)

twas good. :] keep up writing.

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SpazzySpizzy offline Verified User (7 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 45 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 1 week ago (6 minutes after post)

thats beautiful.i love it.it reminds me of myself a little.brought a tear to my eye.great work.

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searching89 offline Verified User (5 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 1 week ago (9 minutes after post)

that was a very nice piece. check out deviantart.com…

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bubblegum66 offline Verified User (5 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 1 week ago (10 minutes after post)

this is really good!!

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lexihope offline Verified User (10 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 1 week ago (46 minutes after post)

me likes it :]]

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Jennaaaxox offline Verified User (1 year, 3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 13 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 1 week ago (1 hour, 24 minutes after post)

what should it be called?

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SpazzySpizzy offline Verified User (7 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 45 #
An Unknown Location | 5 months, 1 week ago (1 hour, 38 minutes after post)

“the awakening”?

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[think peace] offline Verified User (2 years, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
Atlanta, GA, US | 5 months, 1 week ago (2 hours, 39 minutes after post)

“Frozen Past”
“Sleeping Tomorrow Away”
“Yesterday”
“Rise”
“Stained Past”

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grbghp offline Verified User (11 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 18 #
An Undisclosed Location | 5 months, 1 week ago (1 day, 1 hour after post)

thats a very sweet poem.

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evansent:) offline Verified User (1 year, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 630 #
GB | 5 months, 1 week ago (1 day, 15 hours after post)

sweet :)

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ĽÍšĂ_ďЗäŘ offline Verified User (4 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 14 #
An Unknown Location | 4 months, 3 weeks ago (2 weeks, 2 days after post)

Lovely!
I like it
xx

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An Undisclosed Location | 4 months, 2 weeks ago (2 weeks, 5 days after post)

That was really amazing. ^_^

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Eddieee offline Verified User (8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 187 #
An Unknown Location | 4 months, 2 weeks ago (2 weeks, 5 days after post)

Wow, Truly beautiful.

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