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Addiction

My eyes fog over blue and grey
And I see my insides, black
Tarred from your cigarettes
Smoked too closely to my lips
Your lips, my lips
Your cancer, you’re cancer,
The black is me
It is the nothing that’s left
The nothing you’ve left me
I am the cigarette
And you are the cancer
You pull me until there’s nothing left
You crave me, you savor me
You suck me into your lungs
My feet are on fire
I burn bright and then I die
I die and then you step on me
You step on me until there’s nothing left
You’re cancer and I’m just another cigarette.

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smile2believe offline Verified User (5 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 4 months, 4 weeks ago (9 minutes after post)

wow, that’s amazing

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An Unknown Location | 4 months, 4 weeks ago (12 minutes after post)

Well written, friend.

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An Undisclosed Location | 4 months, 4 weeks ago (44 minutes after post)

Thank you

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An Unknown Location | 4 months, 4 weeks ago (53 minutes after post)

Have you ever considered poetry, song-writing or journalism, anything that has something to do with writing? I think you have a talent, your poem really moved me.

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An Undisclosed Location | 4 months, 4 weeks ago (1 hour, 28 minutes after post)

I’m flattered, smile2believe. I was editor-in-chief of my high school’s literary magazine, actually. This is one of the first poems I’ve written in a very, very long time. I’ll write some more, see if you like it.

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An Unknown Location | 4 months, 4 weeks ago (1 hour, 31 minutes after post)

You’re welcome :)

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An Unknown Location | 4 months, 4 weeks ago (6 hours, 20 minutes after post)

i love that. amazing.

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