music help: here’s a song i wrote a week ago tell me what you think :D

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here’s a song i wrote a week ago tell me what you think :D

Feels like a sunny day
when you’re right here by my side
when you’re with me
you’re the only one i see

i just can’t get you out of my head
and i wish you could see
that you mean everything to me
and you will always

can’t you see i wanna be yours, i wanna be yours, i wanna be yours
the only problem is
you just seem so blind
can’t you see i want you to be mine?
so i only have three words for you i love you, i love you, i love you

feels like a rainy day
cause you’re not here today
it’s like the whole worlds fallin’ appart
when your not here with me

i just can’t get you out of my head
and i wish you could see
that you mean everything to me
and you will always

can’t you see i wanna be yours, i wanna be yours, i wanna be yours
the only problem is
you just seem so blind
can’t you see i want you to be mine?
so i only have three words for you i love you, i love you, i love you

finally those clouds of grey
they slowly fade away
as you come trew to your senses
and you take my hand

can’t you see i wanna be yours, i wanna be yours, i wanna be yours
the only problem is
you just seem so blind
can’t you see i want you to be mine?
so i only have three words for you i love you, i love you, i love you

can’t you see i wanna be yours, i wanna be yours, i wanna be yours
the only problem is
you just seem so blind
can’t you see i want you to be mine?
so i only have three words for you i love you, i love you, i love you…

please be honest i don’t care if it’s positive or negative i just want to know the truth!!! :P

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Kangaroo Dominator 1 #
An Unknown Location | 4 months, 1 week ago (5 minutes after post)

that is ****, haha kidding its good

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lolyamu #
An Unknown Location | 3 months, 2 weeks ago (3 weeks after post)

its ok i guess i know ive heard better songs but thats o-kay
-but im sure u can come up with better songs

-ive written some songs my-self and i would love to put them on the intanet and let people comment about them but im afraid there going to steal my song… :s :o

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An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 5 days ago (3 months, 2 weeks after post)

it’s a good song i realy like it but is it a slow or fast song can’t realy tell

sincerly,

abigail

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