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Here’s another song i wrote, i wrote it today :D

I tought it wasn’t true
Tought we didn’t have to
But now i’m gonna miss everyone
Cause i gotta leave

I know one thing, i don’t wanna move, i don’t wanna move
I have no choice
But to move away
I think i’m gonna cry cause…

Have to leave all my friends behind
And i’ll have to start all over
This isn’t gonna be easy
And i’ll miss everyone
It’s tough to say but this is goodbye…

I’ll have to be the new girl
Don’t wanna be the new girl
I just wanna stay where I am
Cause it’s where i belong

I know one thing, i don’t wanna move, i don’t wanna move
I have no choice
But to move away
I think i’m gonna cry cause…

Have to leave all my friends behind
And i’ll have to start all over
This isn’t gonna be easy
And i’ll miss everyone
It’s tough to say but this is goodbye…

It’s done, can’t go back
I gotta unpack
But I realy wanna go back
I only feel like cryin’ cause…

Had to leave all my friends behind
Now I gotta start all over
This ain’t easy
I’m missin’ everyone
It’s tough to say but this is goodbye…

Had to leave all my friends behind
Now I gotta start all over
This ain’t easy
I’m missin’ everyone
It’s tough to say but this is goodbye…
It’s goodbye…

Again i don’t care if it’s positive or negative i only wanna know the truth :P

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pleasedontleaveme. offline Verified User (4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 4 months ago (36 minutes after post)

wow.
im guessing you or someone you really care about is moving?
this is really good.
have you ever herd of nevershoutnever?
this sounds like something he might write.
once again, amazing. i applaud you.

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leahyousef offline Verified User (4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 4 months ago (1 hour, 27 minutes after post)

i thought it was good actually.
i think you could edit somethings so it doesn’t sound like a high school girl leaving her boyfriend but a woman leaving her man and her life behind because something went wrong.
you could say its not being afraid something she just has to do.
good luck!

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4 months ago (1 hour, 30 minutes after post)

lol.

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lolyamu offline Unverified User #
An Unknown Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (2 weeks, 6 days after post)

thats a wierd song

ive heard better defenetly gosh all u care about is moving and you keep
using the same lines over and over again god u need to spread it out a bit

u know? it doesnt really rhyme either :( im depressed….

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carole-anne_ offline Verified User (4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months, 1 week ago (2 weeks, 6 days after post)

lolyamu wrote:
thats a wierd song
well songs dont always have to rhyme and the song is about moving

ive heard better defenetly gosh all u care about is moving and you keep
using the same lines over and over again god u need to spread it out a bit

u know? it doesnt really rhyme either :( im depressed….

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