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what do u all think of this song

what you give is what you get-

selfish people are annoying and yet
happy with themselves they still are whinning
I can hear in my sleep in every single dream
and when I wake I stop and think
how I want my own chance to speak.

Surrounded by them
I need my space but I have defend
every chance I can take.

I love myself
and the chances I have to be great
and I know what it takes to be that way.

Stay on top and never the bottom
keep your friends close and never forget that you got them
thats why there here
thats what makes them closer then a peer
and around them you should never show fear
hold them dear and never forget that they were THERE!!!

through thick or thin I will be there for my good Friends
it makes me sad to think of all the people who have turned there backs
on the one’s they love for some selfish act.

I vowed to god
to show my love to anyone
who has given me theres
thats what makes me proud instead of scared
i am not selfish just really devoted
thats what makes my heart feel like its golden

I hope you demonstrate this act of kindness and love
the man up above will be watching and give you his own love
thats what makes this sweet what you give is what you get
its not about being lucky or having alot of money
its about your peace of mind and a great smile on your face……….

tell me what u think

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}Fållęn{ offline Verified User (4 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 36 #
An Undisclosed Location | 4 months, 1 week ago (22 minutes after post)

I really like it. It feels like a reminder of whats truly important. :)

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An Unknown Location | 4 months, 1 week ago (15 hours, 38 minutes after post)

wow, it did really come up with it? because if you did, your truely a song writer :)
no matter what anyway says, continue with this talent because you may even become a famous singer. keep writing more songs, i would just love to hear them xx

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