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Morning Walk…

I was about to start,
for a morning walk,
Many things were at Heart,
for which i need to talk.

Talk with nature.
to ask him questions,
n to every question he answered.

I told him, ‘how tiring has life been for me’
Nature said, ‘No not at all’
I asked, ‘Why? ‘
when a chill fresh breeze,
gently touched my body,
n I felt the freshness.

I agreed n said, ‘But i cant smile…’
Nature replied, ‘look…’
looking at those golden rays,
striking those fresh new leaves,
and then reflected mildly into my eyes.
I was already smiling.

I agreed n said, ‘Why Nobody likes me? ‘
Nature smiled n showed me birds,
I saw most beautiful of them,
singing all for me,
they were looking at me,
to appreciate n listen to the music,
composed specially for me.

I agreed n asked, ‘I am not beautiful…’
Nature laughed n asked me, ‘How looks this reflection…’
reflection of rising sun in fresh lake’s water,
I smiled n immediately replied, ‘Its so beautiful…’
Nature smiled back n said, ‘U dont see beauty in yourself…’
Nature continued, ‘…u see it in others…’

I agreed n said, ‘i am not good enough to do somethin’ great…’
Nature laughed n held my hand,
As we’re walking,
i saw a injured squirrel,
Natured tried to diverge my attention,
but it couldnt,
n i lifted ‘it’, n decided to fed her.
Nature then smiled n asked, ‘What have u done? ‘

I felt so happy n said, ‘Ur so great…’
Nature asked, ‘How do u say? ‘
I said, ‘i see it…’
He replied, ‘Greatness cannt be seen…’
Its a state,
state in which u cudnt be by just trying,
but only when u decide to be in it.

I smiled,
Nature said, ‘I have to go now…’
I said sadly, ‘So early…’
He said, ‘…there is another place on earth, where its not yet morning, n someone like me wud be waiting for him…’
I smiled again n said, ‘Good bye! ! ! ‘
-Prankul

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An Unknown Location | 4 months ago (2 minutes after post)

I think this speaks to everyone who has troubles and doubts about themselves. It shows that it takes someone else to show us how unique and special we are

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An Unknown Location | 4 months ago (11 minutes after post)

tushay but its not my poem its by by Prankul Agarwal
I came across it and thought it might brighten up peoples days

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