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“Writing in a storm”

The loudest sound that completely fills my eardrums is the sound of rustling trees.
The distant roar of thunder and the rising crescendo of lightning claps wash over me, clearing my senses
The pine branches scratching each other drown out the low howl of the wind surrounding us, replacing our thoughts.
The ever-darkening sky begins to change from a translucent grey to a dark charcoal; deep clouds begin to form in place of the vanishing sunlight
You’re slightly nervous, and look mildly out of place, maybe because you’re not yet in my arms.
I smile, and slowly place my arm around you, and watch as both of us relax, reassured by the content expressions shared on each of our faces
Rain drips, drips, and suddenly rushes explosively out of the drainpipe, which reminds me of my own circumstances in life.
Just like rain drops, we bond, form relationships, and face decisions.
We face challenging and stable conflicts, but how do we eventually deal with these situations?
Like rain drops, do we escape and slide down a pipe, or do we face reality and fight for resolution?
I leaned closer and pulled her close, her soft skin inviting my further touch, her beautiful eyes slightly lighting up as we turned towards each other.
I’m not running away from this one, I thought, she’s so worth fighting for.

http://tylerstunna.blogspot.com/

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smallloren offline Verified User (3 months, 4 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months, 3 weeks ago (1 hour, 53 minutes after post)

This is such a good poem. Ur good

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3 months, 3 weeks ago (7 hours, 5 minutes after post)

Wow, That is a really nice poem. I like the last line the most. So many people don’t fight for what they want, they just let it slip away. I, in most circumstances, tend to want to run. I don’t like getting close to people. I always end up getting hurt. People are so selfish and think only about money. That makes me feel pretty lonely at times.

I have one person who is constantly in my thoughts and in my heart. He has been with me for over a decade. He has hurt me so deeply (though not on purpose) yet been there for me in the biggest trials that I’ve ever had to face. He tells me that I am worth fighting for. I don’t necessarily believe that, but I’m so grateful that he thinks so. I can’t lose such a wonderful man. I have to fight the urge to run, even now. HE is the one that is worth fighting for.

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An Unknown Location | 3 months, 3 weeks ago (11 hours, 57 minutes after post)

Anonymous wrote:
Wow, That is a really nice poem. I like the last line the most. So many people don’t fight for what they want, they just let it slip away. I, in most circumstances, tend to want to run. I don’t like getting close to people. I always end up getting hurt. People are so selfish and think only about money. That makes me feel pretty lonely at times.

I have one person who is constantly in my thoughts and in my heart. He has been with me for over a decade. He has hurt me so deeply (though not on purpose) yet been there for me in the biggest trials that I’ve ever had to face. He tells me that I am worth fighting for. I don’t necessarily believe that, but I’m so grateful that he thinks so. I can’t lose such a wonderful man. I have to fight the urge to run, even now. HE is the one that is worth fighting for.

this is why I wrote this poem. For moments such as these, this poem made you think about this, whether someone is worth fighting for.

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3 months, 3 weeks ago (22 hours, 30 minutes after post)

Stunna, if you ever decide that you think it’s time for marriage, I want to
recommend one movie for you. It’s not perhaps the kind of movie that
everybody would find interesting. I didn’t know if it was my kind of movie,
as it deals with religion throughout, but it’s about more than religion. The
main theme is about “saving your marriage” from the brink of divorce. (or how to improve it) It was a wonderful movie. Your “she’s worth fighting for” theme is the same as Fireproof’s theme. I hope that you get a chance to watch it.

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Stunna offline Verified User (11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months, 3 weeks ago (23 hours, 4 minutes after post)

Anonymous wrote:
Stunna, if you ever decide that you think it’s time for marriage, I want to
recommend one movie for you. It’s not perhaps the kind of movie that
everybody would find interesting. I didn’t know if it was my kind of movie,
as it deals with religion throughout, but it’s about more than religion. The
main theme is about “saving your marriage” from the brink of divorce. (or how to improve it) It was a wonderful movie. Your “she’s worth fighting for” theme is the same as Fireproof’s theme. I hope that you get a chance to watch it.

that’s awesome thank you! i hope you recommend this poem to your friends and people, just link them to my site or whatever.
http://tylerstunna.blogspot.com/2009/…

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Kanabi offline Verified User (1 year, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months, 2 weeks ago (1 day, 10 hours after post)

awww…thats sweet!! I love it.

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