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In my spare time I listen to music, read, and play guitar.

In my spare time, I listen to music, read, and play guitar. a

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bunfu offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months, 3 weeks ago (2 minutes after post)

I’d guess the second one.

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Island offline Verified User (1 year, 5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 7 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months, 3 weeks ago (6 minutes after post)

The first one is more correct, but take out the comma after read - you don’t need one if it’s followed by and.

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sdfasd offline Unverified User #
An Unknown Location | 3 months, 3 weeks ago (7 minutes after post)

actually that i looked up (the comma after and), and it is perfectly correct

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Totally-Retro offline Verified User (5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months, 3 weeks ago (10 minutes after post)

Island is right.

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антихрист offline Verified User (1 year, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months, 3 weeks ago (24 minutes after post)

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Dr. Ralph offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 75 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months, 3 weeks ago (32 minutes after post)

All of the above. You could even go with “in my spare time I listen to music, read and play guitar”. I wouldn’t get too comma happy….

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JeremiahC offline Verified User (3 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months, 3 weeks ago (57 minutes after post)

Island wrote:
The first one is more correct, but take out the comma after read - you don’t need one if it’s followed by and.

Sorry, Island is not correct. You need the comma because it’s a series of three or more. If it was just two (i.e this and that) you wouldn’t need the comma before and or at all.

This sentence is correct:
In my spare time, I listen to music, read, and play guitar.

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Dr. Ralph offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 75 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months, 3 weeks ago (1 hour, 8 minutes after post)

Island is correct you don’t need a comma if it’s followed by and, and you sure don’t need one after time unless you have asthma and it is so difficult to breathe you have to pause every three words…

JeremiahC offline Verified User (3 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months, 3 weeks ago (1 hour, 10 minutes after post)

Dr. Ralph wrote:
Island is correct you don’t need a comma if it’s followed by and, and you sure don’t need one after time unless you have asthma and it is so difficult to breathe you have to pause every three words…

Fine, I let my publisher know she wrong. :/

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Dr. Ralph offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 75 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months, 3 weeks ago (1 hour, 23 minutes after post)

You need me to come slap her?

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JeremiahC offline Verified User (3 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 3 months, 3 weeks ago (1 hour, 24 minutes after post)

lol

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Good ole boy offline Verified User (2 years, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 11 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months, 3 weeks ago (1 hour, 45 minutes after post)

Too many commas can ruin the structure and clarity of a sentence.

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