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Please, I need to know which of my poems is my best piece, any help, please?

I have to submit one for a contest where the grand prize is $5,000 but I dont know what one to submit. They are on my profile. Titles:

unforgivable (a poem)
Not Today (a poem)
Knock knock (a poem)
Enough
Heli Here, Heli There
Flowers (a poem)
Peace
Branded on my Skin
Just an Ordinary Storm
Puzzle Called Life
Waiting



this isnt all of my poems. have all of them in the link, i believe

or you can check out this link. it connects to my folder on a friends website for young writers.

http://www.leahbackstrom.com/?cat=12

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SweetBlade edited this post 3 months ago. Read the previous text »

i need to know which of my poems is my best piece, any help? i have to submit one for a contest but i dont know what one to submit. they are on my profile. titles:

unforgivable (a poem)
Not Today (a poem)
Knock knock (a poem)
Enough
Heli Here, Heli There
Flowers (a poem)
Peace
Branded on my Skin

ℓινιηg4уσυ offline Verified User (1 year, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 999 Add Friend #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months ago (6 minutes after post)

waiting or unforgivable

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SweetBlade edited this post 3 months ago. Read the previous text »

i need to know which of my poems is my best piece, any help? i have to submit one for a contest but i dont know what one to submit. they are on my profile. titles:

unforgivable (a poem)
Not Today (a poem)
Knock knock (a poem)
Enough
Heli Here, Heli There
Flowers (a poem)
Peace
Branded on my Skin
Just an Ordinary Storm
Puzzle Called Life
Waiting

SweetBlade edited this post 3 months ago. Read the previous text »

i need to know which of my poems is my best piece, any help? i have to submit one for a contest but i dont know what one to submit. they are on my profile. titles:

unforgivable (a poem)
Not Today (a poem)
Knock knock (a poem)
Enough
Heli Here, Heli There
Flowers (a poem)
Peace
Branded on my Skin
Just an Ordinary Storm
Puzzle Called Life
Waiting



or you can check out this link. it connects to my folder on a friends website for young writers.

SweetBlade edited this post 3 months ago. Read the previous text »

i need to know which of my poems is my best piece, any help? i have to submit one for a contest but i dont know what one to submit. they are on my profile. titles:

unforgivable (a poem)
Not Today (a poem)
Knock knock (a poem)
Enough
Heli Here, Heli There
Flowers (a poem)
Peace
Branded on my Skin
Just an Ordinary Storm
Puzzle Called Life
Waiting



or you can check out this link. it connects to my folder on a friends website for young writers.

http://www.leahbackstrom.com/?cat=12

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SweetBlade offline Verified User (10 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 7 Add Friend #
An Unknown Location | 3 months ago (27 minutes after post)

ℓινιηg4уσυ� wrote:
waiting or unforgivable

thanks. do you think you could invite some people to help out with the desicion?

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lucy_h offline Verified User (6 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 1 Add Friend #
An Unknown Location | 3 months ago (28 minutes after post)

Not Today or Heli Here, Heli There

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ℓινιηg4уσυ offline Verified User (1 year, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 999 Add Friend #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months ago (29 minutes after post)

Hi,
I read them the best is unforgivable and enough is good too really like it..keep it up friend.i. love. you.’ is good too,
What we had really nice too

But for me waiting is the best one

Nice not today ,and nice too puzzle called life..

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ℓινιηg4уσυ offline Verified User (1 year, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 999 Add Friend #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 months ago (30 minutes after post)

Yes i will :)

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name with no face offline Verified User (2 years, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 3 Add Friend #
Warminster, PA, US | 3 months ago (33 minutes after post)

are you looking for compliments or can someone tell you they all pretty much [are of poor quality] and you should take a poetry class? the flowers one was the least not good one.

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HARVARDgirl!! :) offline Verified User (4 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 170 Add Friend #
An Unknown Location | 3 months ago (49 minutes after post)

please send me a link….where should i visit 4 his/her poems?!?!

ℓινιηg4уσυ� wrote:
Yes i will :)

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An Undisclosed Location | 3 months ago (1 hour, 5 minutes after post)

HARVARDgirl!! :) wrote:
please send me a link….where should i visit 4 his/her poems?!?!

ℓινιηg4уσυ� wrote:
Yes i will :)

http://www.leahbackstrom.com/?cat=12

i really like them :)
I think you will do :)

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HARVARDgirl!! :) offline Verified User (4 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 170 Add Friend #
An Unknown Location | 3 months ago (1 hour, 16 minutes after post)

tnx;may i answer later?!?!i don’t have enough time to read them several times…sorry

ℓινιηg4уσυ� wrote:
HARVARDgirl!! :) wrote:
please send me a link….where should i visit 4 his/her poems?!?!
ℓινιηg4уσυ� wrote:
Yes i will :)

http://www.leahbackstrom.com/?cat=12

i really like them :)
I think you will do :)

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Eddieee offline Verified User (8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 99 Add Friend #
An Unknown Location | 3 months ago (3 hours, 10 minutes after post)

Just an Ordinary Storm or Unforgivable would be my picks. Good luck in the contest :)

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An Unknown Location | 3 months ago (3 hours, 16 minutes after post)

My personal favorites are Branded on My Skin and Heli Here,Heli There.

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An Undisclosed Location | 3 months ago (7 hours, 40 minutes after post)

I like Heli here, Heli there. It’s a pleasant poem for all age groups to understand and to bring a smile.

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SweetBlade edited this post 1 week, 2 days ago. Read the previous text »

Please, I need to know which of my poems is my best piece, any help, please? I have to submit one for a contest where the grand prize is $5,000 but I dont know what one to submit. They are on my profile. Titles:

unforgivable (a poem)
Not Today (a poem)
Knock knock (a poem)
Enough
Heli Here, Heli There
Flowers (a poem)
Peace
Branded on my Skin
Just an Ordinary Storm
Puzzle Called Life
Waiting



or you can check out this link. it connects to my folder on a friends website for young writers.

http://www.leahbackstrom.com/?cat=12

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