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Cheers for them roared the oceans tide
Shrills are heard within the forest lies
shouts only made from the mountain avalanche
Trembling stampedes shake the west side ranch
Waves of echo tune out through in a cave
Pouring down sand like the Sahara sun glaze
Chilly winter hills, can man survive with will
Raspberry sunset stunningly on the coast of Brazil
Astonishing places suit a journey so grand
But when you find paradise I’ll shake your hand.
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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (9 minutes after post)

Ohhh pretty sounding ^^

“out through in a cave” was a bit hard for me to read for some reason though, but oh well it doesnt effect it in a bad way anyways xD

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (10 minutes after post)

Wow, I really like this. I love that last line…
“But when you find paradise I’ll shake your hand.”

I’ve only read two of your poems, but you’ve got a real talent. = )

maybe i should staart posting my poems to see what everyone tinks of them…

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (12 minutes after post)

yet again, another great poem!! Well done! =D

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (12 minutes after post)

lionhea wrote:
Wow, I really like this. I love that last line…
“But when you find paradise I’ll shake your hand.”

I’ve only read two of your poems, but you’ve got a real talent. = )

maybe i should staart posting my poems to see what everyone tinks of them…

thank you so much! yeah you should its a great place to get feedback =).

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (13 minutes after post)

sum wrote:
Ohhh pretty sounding ^^

“out through in a cave” was a bit hard for me to read for some reason though, but oh well it doesnt effect it in a bad way anyways xD

haha yeah, I wanted to switch it around to make it sound catchy and thank you very much

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (14 minutes after post)

Oh yeah i liked the last line too too lol

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Fern Tree Gully, 07, AU | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (21 minutes after post)

Ohhh, I like.

Prettyful. :)

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (3 hours, 45 minutes after post)

sweetiejay wrote:
Ohhh, I like.

Prettyful. :)

Thank you =)

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (4 hours, 22 minutes after post)

That is great. Good job my friend :)

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 4 weeks ago (14 hours, 41 minutes after post)

Well done :-)

“Raspberry sunset stunningly on the coast of Brazil

P.S I am glad you like Brazil - I”m from Rio de Janeiro

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 3 weeks ago (1 day after post)

lezine wrote:
Well done :-)

“Raspberry sunset stunningly on the coast of Brazil

P.S I am glad you like Brazil - I”m from Rio de Janeiro

Thats great, thank you. Brazil is beautiful

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GB | 2 months, 3 weeks ago (1 day, 19 hours after post)

sweet :)

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