Persuasive essays.
They are terrible. And i suck at writing. Can someone please review my essay, and then tell me what you think. or what i should fix. If you see any erros , that too. By the way. I just chose the easier side of the argument aha
Education is being impacted by the internet. The internet is very dstracting. Using the internet is the lazy way to do work, and website information is not aways correct. The internet has been ruining education since it has been created.
To begin with, the internet is distracting. Students that try to do their work on the internet can get easily side-tracked by games. The internet has thousands of games to play. They are all distracting and prevent people from doing their work. Everything on the computer screen is lit up. On web pages there are lots of bright colors and flashing lights. Brighter colors and objects that blink snap people’s attention. Ads on sites keep people from being on task. People see ads and they will want to click on them and check out what’s there. It is hard to focus on studying because the internet keeps students occupied.
Also, the internet is the lazy way to do work. The internet is huge; there is so much to information on it. Anyone can simply copy and paste data. Plagarism is a big issue in the internet. People can easily post or search up answers for hoemwork. When homework answers are posted, students dont have to do any type of work. It is already done for them. Written work is also falling away. Instead of using actual books, they now have virtual books. Books are going to disapear if the internet keeps growing.
Furthermore, everything you see on the internet isn’t always correct. There are many errors online. WEbsites can be edited by anyone. People could go in and type all the wrong answers. There may also be multiple answers written by different people. If there are so many answers, how do you know which is right or wrong? There is the possiblity that website are outdated. Information of the internet is not reliable.
As you can see. the internet has been creating problems since the beginning. The internet keep people from their work, makes them inactive, and gives out wrong information. We neet to get the internet undercontrol before education is ruined.
suck at writing. Can someone please review my essay, and then tell me what you think. or what i should fix. If you see any erros , that too.
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