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Tomorrow (a poem)

Tomorrow the world could end.

Tomorrow straight lines could bend.

Tomorrow time could stop,

we become a world of broken clocks,

and we live by the light of the sun.

In a world of chaos and confusion,

all we can do is look for tomorrow,

because tomorrow is all that we have.

Yesterday has passed,

today is already here,

but tomorrow hasn’t yet come.

So scan the horizon and reach for tomorrow,

because tomorrow, brings freedom to all.

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littlenick online Verified User (1 year, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 155 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 months, 3 weeks ago (3 minutes after post)

Nice wake up call for everybody!

Well said!

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SweetBlade offline Verified User (10 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 9 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 3 weeks ago (5 minutes after post)

littlenick wrote:
Nice wake up call for everybody!

Well said!

thank you. its basically only the rough draft. the real one is in my locker at school. oops. lol

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ameliaearthlin offline Verified User (8 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 17 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 3 weeks ago (6 minutes after post)

nicely put!!!!
I enjoyed it!

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 3 weeks ago (7 minutes after post)

not bad, reaching for tomorrow as we speak!

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 3 weeks ago (11 minutes after post)

luck with your freedom buddy, I’ve been waiting for tomorrow for a while now

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 3 weeks ago (13 minutes after post)

I like it :) Very Hopeful :) :)

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An Undisclosed Location | 2 months, 3 weeks ago (25 minutes after post)

Love it!

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 3 weeks ago (1 hour, 9 minutes after post)

Nice job!

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 3 weeks ago (3 hours, 27 minutes after post)

I really like that.

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An Unknown Location | 2 months, 3 weeks ago (1 day, 10 hours after post)

Once again. I love how you express yourself in these poems. simply excellent!

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SweetBlade edited this post 2 months, 2 weeks ago. Read the previous text »

Tomorrow (a poem)

Tomorrow the world could end.

Tomorrow straight lines could bend.

Tomorrow time could stop,

we become a world of broken clocks,

and we live by the light of the sun.

So we look for tomorrow,

because tomorrow is all that we have.

Yesterday has passed,

today is already here,

but tomorrow hasn’t yet come.

So scan the horizon and reach for tomorrow,

because tomorrow, brings freedom to all.

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SweetBlade offline Verified User (10 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 9 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 2 weeks ago (2 days, 23 hours after post)

mflzzlove wrote:

littlenick wrote:
Nice wake up call for everybody!

Well said!

thank you. its basically only the rough draft. the real one is in my locker at school. oops. lol

now its the real one. i missed a line.

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