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Is this sentence grammatically correct?

And that is what Jonathan strives to achieve: to persuade his fellow churchgoers to be God fearing men thankful for their Redeemer.

Some people discourage sentences beginning with “And”, but I am not referring to that. Should there be a comma after “men”?

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princessbelle offline Verified User (2 months) Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months ago (3 minutes after post)

that would work.

so would a semicolon

or add in who are “..God fearing men who are thankful..”

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princessbelle offline Verified User (2 months) Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months ago (4 minutes after post)

nothing in grammar is set in stone. it is only rules made to be broken.

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mz.mo offline Verified User (9 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 22 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months ago (17 minutes after post)

You should be careful about starting a sentence with the word “And”. Otherwise it looks good.

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