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Lie

Lie to me
Say you love me
Lie to me
Say you won’t let me be

You said we could have it all
Now, on the ground I crawl
Make me believe you will hold me
Lie to me

I fell completely
Now you defeat me
Say you love me
Lie to me…

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Eddieee changed the tags on this post: they were "writig, poetry, writing" 2 months, 1 week ago.

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}Fållęn{ offline Verified User (4 months, 4 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 82 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 months, 1 week ago (4 minutes after post)

Wow.

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Eddieee offline Verified User (8 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 1,451 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 1 week ago (6 minutes after post)

That sums it up.

}Fållęn{ wrote:
Wow.

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An Undisclosed Location | 2 months, 1 week ago (10 minutes after post)

Its good. Really. I like all the emotions playing through it.

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Eddieee offline Verified User (8 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 1,451 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 1 week ago (34 minutes after post)

That makes one of us. A bit to close to home for me. Glad you liked it :)

}Fållęn{ wrote:
Its good. Really. I like all the emotions playing through it.

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Dr. Ralph offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 75 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 1 week ago (47 minutes after post)

I have felt like this poem a lot.

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Eddieee offline Verified User (8 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 1,451 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 1 week ago (55 minutes after post)

I am sorry Doc. I wish it was not so. I hope it passes.

Dr. Ralph wrote:
I have felt like this poem a lot.

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2 months, 1 week ago (57 minutes after post)

That’s sad.

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Eddieee offline Verified User (8 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 1,451 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 1 week ago (59 minutes after post)

Sorry for sad. Thank you for reading.

Anonymous wrote:
That’s sad.

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SpazzySpizzy offline Verified User (7 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 86 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 1 week ago (1 hour, 37 minutes after post)

It is sad but its amazing.

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2 months, 1 week ago (15 hours, 13 minutes after post)

Eddieee wrote:
Sorry for sad. Thank you for reading.

Anonymous wrote:
That’s sad.

What I meant, was that it was sad that people treat people badly. It’s also sad that people get hurt. They writing is good.

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Eddieee offline Verified User (8 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 1,451 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 1 week ago (19 hours, 27 minutes after post)

Thanks Spazzy

SpazzySpizzy wrote:
It is sad but its amazing.

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Eddieee offline Verified User (8 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 1,451 #
An Unknown Location | 2 months, 1 week ago (19 hours, 31 minutes after post)

True enough…Thanks

Anonymous wrote:

Eddieee wrote:
Sorry for sad. Thank you for reading.

Anonymous wrote:
That’s sad.

What I meant, was that it was sad that people treat people badly. It’s also sad that people get hurt. They writing is good.

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