This sounds werid , how would it sound better …….

k-la leonardo

This sounds werid , how would it sound better …

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“When I was a child my intentions were to be a rich powerful man.Just like my great grandfather before his mysterious murder by the Chinese government.

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An Undisclosed Location | 2 months ago (14 minutes after post)

Saying that he was murdered, while interesting, is kind of unnessesary information.

How about:

“When I was a child, I intended to be just like my great grandfather; rich and powerful.”

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2 months ago (17 minutes after post)

“When I was a child my intentions were to be a rich powerful man.Just like my great grandfather before his mysterious murder by the Chinese government.”

um, maybe:
When I was a child my intentions were to be a rich powerful man. My great grandfather had had the same intent before his mysterious murder by the Chinese government.

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