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Disappears

I’m not trapped
illusions in reflections
Moon shadow in my window
I’m not really there
I’m not anywhere

Just a passing echo
One sided and absent
choking words that strangle
Meaningless and bare
Vague with despair

Wandering the valley
Going nowhere
Watching the train
Smoke whistle heart beat
Going the distance
The dying sun
In honey tears
Fades through me
disappears

Well I noticed that some people are posting poetry and stuff on here so I felt like putting this up. Writing just helps me get through the night. Sorry if I disappointed you with the title and you were expecting me to ask for help on my disappearing hand or whatever :P G’night from me now.

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bexsphillip offline Verified User (1 month, 3 weeks) Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (7 hours, 37 minutes after post)

wow ur really good at the poetry thing and describing ur feelings
it sounds like ur really struggling and seeing the world in a dark light
do u feel invisble?
but u cant sit around forever feeling lonely and depressed
have u tryed counsilling maybe even a new job or hobbie to meet someone
maybe someone who will find the real u through ur mask
dont give up hope
even thought the nights feel endless and the days

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ZeroSum offline Verified User (2 months) Shouts: 11 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (9 hours, 49 minutes after post)

Thanks. It’s not about feeling invisible exactly…it’s more about feeling like I’ve got no substance - that really, I’m nothing. There’s nothing behind the mask. Maybe I want to disappear. I don’t know..
Anyway, thanks for the kind words :) It’s hard to break out of it, but I’ll try.

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SpazzySpizzy online Verified User (7 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 41 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (1 day, 15 hours after post)

Thats incredibly good.

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ZeroSum offline Verified User (2 months) Shouts: 11 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (1 day, 15 hours after post)

Hey thanks :) Maybe I’ll incorperate some of the ideas into a song I’m working on (it has no words right now hehe)

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Rock On \m/ offline Verified User (2 months, 2 weeks) Shouts: 37 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (1 day, 21 hours after post)

excellent, you could be the next morrison :)

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ZeroSum offline Verified User (2 months) Shouts: 11 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (1 day, 21 hours after post)

Ha! I somehow doubt it, but thank you :)

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