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Eddieee

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Breathe

I joined the brotherhood
I thought it would be good
I hear the waters breathe
This pain, I cannot conceive

Through your path I walked
Though I did not talk
I passed an endless sky
Never did I ask why

The light is almost gone
And still I walk along
I hear the waters breathe
This pain, I cannot conceive

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littlenick 152 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (3 minutes after post)

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Eddieee 132 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (5 minutes after post)

I did not wish to make you sad! Smile my friend! All is never lost. :)

littlenick wrote:
:(

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littlenick 152 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (6 minutes after post)

That poem makes sound like you are in dire straits. Are you OK?

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SpazzySpizzy 41 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (8 minutes after post)

Beautiful as usual:)

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Eddieee 132 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (15 minutes after post)

Just words my friend. I write what I feel. I told Spazzy I need a filter. No matter this darkness. I always hold hope. Thank you, but do not worry for me. I am…..Just me..

littlenick wrote:
That poem makes sound like you are in dire straits. Are you OK?

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Eddieee 132 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (16 minutes after post)

Thanks :)

SpazzySpizzy wrote:
Beautiful as usual:)

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friendlyheart 35 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (18 minutes after post)

:) it’s good if you can write about your emotions

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Eddieee 132 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (21 minutes after post)

Thanks. Words keep me sane. It is a good way to vent. For me anyway :)

friendlyheart wrote:
:) it’s good if you can write about your emotions

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friendlyheart 35 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (23 minutes after post)

Eddieee wrote:
Thanks. Words keep me sane. It is a good way to vent. For me anyway :)

friendlyheart wrote:
:) it’s good if you can write about your emotions

for me as well..
i just love to write
and btw writing gives wings to your imagination , which is awesome

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Eddieee 132 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (31 minutes after post)

Nice :)

friendlyheart wrote:

Eddieee wrote:
Thanks. Words keep me sane. It is a good way to vent. For me anyway :)

friendlyheart wrote:
:) it’s good if you can write about your emotions

for me as well..
i just love to write
and btw writing gives wings to your imagination , which is awesome

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friendlyheart 35 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (40 minutes after post)

Eddieee wrote:
Nice :)

friendlyheart wrote:

Eddieee wrote:
Thanks. Words keep me sane. It is a good way to vent. For me anyway :)

friendlyheart wrote:
:) it’s good if you can write about your emotions

for me as well..
i just love to write
and btw writing gives wings to your imagination , which is awesome

i agree :D

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