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love hurts because love reveals alot of things

but if love finds parden and grace can never faulter
though it be constantly tested by fear
and refined by the fire of honour

love well
love found me three times
at least i thought
heartbreak
well lets say broke three times
a physical crack

my chest just let go
a soundwave of pain
ill never forget that

though one was for egos

i figured some that i was
not to be

zeropro woe

to be would pull me under

oh the thunder of show
fragmented in sorrow

dispair had illuded even lulled my primary purpose
but as with the seasons of fall and spring

birth and rebirth
go hand in hand

so will shattered pieces of the same mirror see the image of the former reflection
and be drawn to
compelled to almost belief
that it is so
one in the same thing

as the movements of stars confess the never ending
cosmos gnosis
we are still none the wiser
but we are

free will

thankful now i emerge from lower grounds to higher passage
submerged in her finer detail
like the waters of creation
purer garments of love formily unknownst to me
a kinder spirit whom i had not imagined
where would i be
now without fresh beginnings
every point is a start
every corner a new direction
every happening
for experience gathers true knowledge of
we are to learn by mistake it seems
but all mistakes are a gift to understand the ultimate
fit for profit

question or quest for enlightenment must be fullfilled by the interlect of contemplation

to acknowledge the real thing when it graces you with its presence would be polite
for the manna of the manor is sustained by manners
respect
it will touch your soul

thats all it knows
and all i understand

you must know its beauty and innocence
frajile is only touching the surface of what is to describe its absolute wonder
delicate as newborn sight

if the puzzle doesnt go together well
and the puzzler make not means to adjust it
how so can we have a perfect picture
scenic splender

somebody told me once you am i
but we are broken
this is the example
i am all
as for one thing

of instinct
self preservation must warrent attention
you cannot kill me by killing yourself
or kill yourself without killing me
if words ever meant anything
i will sing

singular notes have more clarity
harmonic resonaters of solo flight
peace makers
do you talk of
a quest of soul delights
a purpose directive such
is natural a state of mind now
does it hurt to be happy
it will pass you
time has a way
and genesis is the ending even as old
im told
we are above all things

individual

seperate
identity has a name
it is you who identifys self
i see what you are
what you make of it

please
let there be no emptyness or end
many suffer this day over greater waters
say even have lost the breath of life
how can we suffer self when children cry for help
and cold is creeping

two become one in flesh
only in the body gem
see them return to uno in spirit then
will men i

love will come and go for many
plenty and plentiful are the waters of it
alternative enemy or alter native message
love is struggle of duality
it will only consist of tolerance
and mutual agreement
love will suffer many things
the vehicle of truth must forego some part of self that that part may be in emerged in the other
co authority cannot undermine the order of things
a house can not stand divided
say said
one must lead
one must follow
many many times i thought i could not run free
all alone in the hills of abandonment
it sent me savage for a time
i became wary of many and some
trust another anima
i dont

but everyone deserves the second chance
benefit of the doubt
and help

the clan became unjustice its fuct us
corruption replaced protection in as much as
now i fear the science has touched the surface
of oblivion
iam love
cant touch us
the army of deception is marching
your laughing

wake up and imagine what evolution could create
given unlimited millenia
we cant contemplate

we know nothing as far as solid fact
hard evidence is at best some wild guess
we will rise above these days
we have innocent betrayel mass education
but it is written inside engraved on the very conscience
i am dying to meet the maker
i consider
we have much in common
what dies cannot be hurt anymore

this is my last resort

bohemian grove grew wild the wise old owl is delusional
look at the puppets growing fatter
the strings are connected to the hand of false offer

many many more starve
even o grain they crave
the vain system is the sister
and system and symphony od desolation for all
dont trust her
she is readied to strike and like all snakes coiled in preparation

nothing can withstand in the abscence of light
and nothing can withstand the presence of it

it we divide and conquer
in as much as there be ubiquitous understanding and order

celebration will arive
be our answer
people day
i see the memory fade
earthling day hey
wouldnt that be great
human beings being human mate
humane ways become game lord we pray

no racial division

no creed
no culturalism
nationalism
just planetary goodwill listen

for all kindred children of earth
our hostess
whom we overlook
footprints on the moon

and we are flying without wings
we travel the universal highways of time and spaces
hurtling across eon
the mother of mammals races

do you know where the planets going
whens the next station global conductor
who the hells driving
the thing is
in hiding
please forgive me my mother love
my liquid celestial
world of hurt
believe we are destiny incarnate
made for a greater day that awaits
the global transit authority is massive
incrediblbly spacious
a golden pass
gifted when heaven was paid in full

no return flights available
its to late to go back down that road

this is your captain speaking
thankyou for flying vehicle earth

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ℓινιηg4уσυ offline Verified User (1 year, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 999 Add Friend #
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love hurts because love reveals alot of things
but if love finds parden and grace can never faulter
though it be constantly tested by fear
and refined by the fire of honour

love well
i was in love many times
least i thought
heart did break
say broke three times
like a physical crack my chest just let go
a soundwave of pain
ill never forget though
though one was for egos

i figured some that i was
not to be zeropro woe

to be would pull me under
oh the thunder of show
fragmented in my sorrow

dispair had illuded even lulled my primary purpose
but as with the seasons of fall and spring

birth and rebirth

so will shattered pieces of the same mirror see the image of the former reflection
and be drawn to
compelled to almost belief
that it is so
one in the same thing
as the movements of stars confess the never ending
cosmos gnosis
we are still none the wiser
but we are

free will

thankful now i emerge from lower grounds to higher passage
submerged in her finer detail
like the waters of creation
purer garments of love formily unknownst to me
a kinder spirit whom i had not imagined
where would i be
now without fresh beginnings
every point is a start
every corner a new direction
every happening for experience gathers true knowledge of
we are to learn by mistake it seems
but all mistakes are a gift to understand the ultimate
question or quest for enlightenment must be fullfilled by the interlect of contemplation
to acknowledge the real thing when it graces you with its presence would be polite
for the manna of the manor is sustained by manners
respect
it will touch your soul

thats all it knows

and you must know its beauty and innocence
frajile is only touching the surface of what is to describe its raw wonder
delicate as even newborn wings

if the puzzle doesnt go together well
and the puzzler make not means to adjust it
how so can we have a perfect picture
scenic splender

somebody told me once you am i
but we are broken
this is the example
i am all
as for one thing

of instinct
self preservation must warrent attention
you cannot kill me by killing yourself
or kill yourself without killing me
if words ever meant anything
i will sing

singular notes have more clarity
harmonic resonaters of solo flight
peace makers
do you talk of
a quest of soul delights
a purpose directive such
is natural to feel this crush
it will pass you
time has a way
and genesis is the ending even as old
im told
we are above all things individual
seperate
identity has a name
it is you who identifys self
i see what you are
what you make it

no emptyness or end
many suffer this day over greater waters
say even have lost the breath of life
how can we suffer self when children cry for help
two become one in flesh
only in flesh gem
see them return to uno in spirit then will men
l
love will come and go for many
plenty and plentiful are the waters of it
alternative enemy or alter native message
love is struggle of duality
it will only consist of tolerance
and mutual agreement
love will suffer many things
we the vehicle of truth must forego some part of self that that part may be in emerged in the other
co authority cannot undermine
a house can not stand divided
say said
one must lead
one must follow
many many times i thought i could not run free
all alone in the hills of abandonment
it sent me savage for a time
i became wary of many and some
trust another anima
i dont

but everyone deserves the second chance
benefit of the doubt
and help

the clan became unjustice its fuct us
corruption replaced protection in as much as
now i fear the science has evolved
bohemian grove grew wild and many take behind closed curtains whilst
more over many more starve
even of grain they crave
the vain system is the sister
and system of deathe for all
dont trust her
she is readied to strike and like all snakes coiled in preparation
celebration be our answer
people day
earthling day
human beings being human mate
humane ways become game lord we pray
no race
no creed
no culturalism
nationalism
just planetary goodwill

for all kindred children of earth
our hostess
whom we overlook so oft

we travel the universal highways of time and spaces
hurtling across eon
the mother of mammals
do you know where the planets going
whens the next station
who the hells driving
the thing is
please forgive

i believe we are destiny incarnate
made for a greater day that awaits
the global transit authority
is coming
its a golden pass we holding
that ticket to ride

no return flights available
to late to go backwards

this is your captain speaking
thankyou for flying vehicle earth

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beatricegalant offline Verified User (1 year, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 9 Add Friend #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 month, 3 weeks ago (18 hours, 50 minutes after post)

This is a very powerful poem or song. It has lots of deep meaning.

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Tictactomm offline Verified User (1 year, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 2 Add Friend #
Edmonton, AB, CA | 1 month, 3 weeks ago (1 day, 12 hours after post)

I love the stream of conciousness Aki. Lots of contradictions in the writing:

EG
“you cannot kill me by killing yourself
or kill yourself without killing me”

“nothing can withstand in the abscence of light
and nothing can withstand the presence of it”

I respect the process of the flow and your style, just don’t leave those poems once the creative fires have ebbed. They are too good not to rewrite and tighten.

The cool rationality of a second draft tempers the creative element and makes it stronger.

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AKITHMA offline Verified User (2 years) Long Term User Shouts: 8 Add Friend #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 month, 3 weeks ago (2 days after post)

awesome tictact thanks ,refreshing advice,the con tradition is yes like the contradition of love,love in its element can be far from its action at the best of times,,,

no man can live without it and no man shall see it and live,do you follow

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Tictactomm offline Verified User (1 year, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 2 Add Friend #
Edmonton, AB, CA | 1 month, 3 weeks ago (4 days, 1 hour after post)

I do follow, sadly, I do.

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An Undisclosed Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (1 week, 2 days after post)

tho spirit discern many a thing
it is shock treatment to the earthen temple
the body weak
a frajile structure that lessons with the touch of time
i think many shall fall faint into a deathlike stroke uponwitness
for the heart of hearts is a delicate organ
it is the voice of reason
and as such tested constant
mind weary and in need of gentle
it will bite
dont be fooled
all animals reflex the primal interlect when cornered
i am just a human
and like you want something better
but it cannot be brought
it cannot be borrowed
it cannot be leased or stolen
it is the trophy of patience
and i shall wait for the stella currents of time
to deliver me safely to the cosmic hands of the clockmaker

love can be the only safe refuge in
the paranoid humanoid
state of the world

the fear
is engulfing every last breath of hope
its true look at every dream you had
it is driven by the very same hand of
think about it
pleasure or pain
need it or want
extreme sports dont cut it
just cant touch this

pure justice
and justice for all
breath the fumes of faith

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