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The Gods

Where are all gods
I can’t beat these odds
Left here to fight
Holding back the night

Prayers are sent
Still my mind is bent
Barely holding on
My hope is all but gone

I try to fight the fight
Yet, loosing ground to the night
I hold my sword high
Calling out my battle cry

Prayers are sent
My armor left bent
Where are all the gods
I can’t beat these odds

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meg_ryan offline Verified User (6 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 20 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 month, 3 weeks ago (36 minutes after post)

Interesting :) again you are a great poet.

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Eddieee offline Verified User (8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 100 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 3 weeks ago (38 minutes after post)

Interesting you say :)

meg_ryan wrote:
Interesting :) again you are a great poet.

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SpazzySpizzy offline Verified User (7 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 42 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 3 weeks ago (1 hour, 22 minutes after post)

Yes you can beat it.You just have to keep fighting.If it all gets to be too much,you have backup:)

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Je ne sais pa offline Verified User (2 years) Long Term User Shouts: 209 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 month, 3 weeks ago (16 hours, 25 minutes after post)

The odds are never even
Life is a constant battle which never seem to end
Where are the gods you ask
Where is your faith i ask
Though my faith has been diminished i am not one to speak
But i do believe dear new friend that if we are given free will it is to serve ourselves
To fight our own battles which we inflict upon ourselves, our own human race
which seem to thrive at a minute and fall the next
Where is the humane race i ask of you
We seem to live for ourselves and immediate family
while forgetting that our neighbors next door or the next country is to be treated with kindness and not bitter rivalry
Where are the gods you ask
where are they indeed for i agree with you
but we were given our free will to ask where are the gods or if there are any

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Eddieee offline Verified User (8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 100 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (23 hours, 57 minutes after post)

Nice! Thanks for the backup my friend :)

SpazzySpizzy wrote:
Yes you can beat it.You just have to keep fighting.If it all gets to be too much,you have backup:)

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Eddieee offline Verified User (8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 100 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (1 day after post)

I lost faith many battles ago. Not to worry. I will keep fighting the fight. Thank you ange.

Petite ange wrote:
The odds are never even
Life is a constant battle which never seem to end
Where are the gods you ask
Where is your faith i ask
Though my faith has been diminished i am not one to speak
But i do believe dear new friend that if we are given free will it is to serve ourselves
To fight our own battles which we inflict upon ourselves, our own human race
which seem to thrive at a minute and fall the next
Where is the humane race i ask of you
We seem to live for ourselves and immediate family
while forgetting that our neighbors next door or the next country is to be treated with kindness and not bitter rivalry
Where are the gods you ask
where are they indeed for i agree with you
but we were given our free will to ask where are the gods or if there are any

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