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A bump

A bump in the night
Footsteps on the stairs
Causing me fright
A beady eye glares

I pull over the covers
The heavy air smothers
A bump in the night
Causing me fright

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tuney offline Unverified User #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (1 minute after post)

blahhhh

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Eddieee offline Verified User (7 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 132 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (5 minutes after post)

tuney wrote:
blahhhh

Perhaps, but it was just for fun. Halloween is right around the corner :)

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meg_ryan offline Verified User (6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 40 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (8 minutes after post)

Goooo Halloween, and thats not what i thought of when I read your beautiful work.
Oh but thats the magic of words.
Great job Eddieee, and never stop writing…your work is to good. :)

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Eddieee offline Verified User (7 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 132 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (12 minutes after post)

Thanks Meg, Happy Halloween :)

meg_ryan wrote:
Goooo Halloween, and thats not what i thought of when I read your beautiful work.
Oh but thats the magic of words.
Great job Eddieee, and never stop writing…your work is to good. :)

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jacob_blacks_wifey offline Verified User (1 month, 3 weeks) Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (48 minutes after post)

eddieee do you write songs?
cuz i really need help
in writting a song
for my school
i had 1 month but i cant get nothing
it could be about beauty or friends

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Eddieee offline Verified User (7 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 132 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (1 hour, 1 minute after post)

While I do enjoy music, I do not write songs. Sorry. I could look for a poem I have written about beauty or friends but you would need to do the rest. Would that help?

jacob_blacks_wifey wrote:
eddieee do you write songs?
cuz i really need help
in writting a song
for my school
i had 1 month but i cant get nothing
it could be about beauty or friends

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jacob_blacks_wifey offline Verified User (1 month, 3 weeks) Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (2 hours, 36 minutes after post)

yeah that would help
thnx

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SpazzySpizzy online Verified User (7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 41 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (2 hours, 37 minutes after post)

Everyone knows that monsters cant penetrate blankets:)I like it.

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jacob_blacks_wifey offline Verified User (1 month, 3 weeks) Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (2 hours, 37 minutes after post)

ok……

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