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Everything Froze

There were voices in my head
Little words that spoke of dread
Time stood still
It made me ill

I thought love was black or white
This void I’m in gives me fright
You mean more to me than I can say
If only I could find these words in the light of day

I looked in your eyes
Catching me by surprise
Everything froze
And no one knows

Everything froze…

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SpazzySpizzy offline Verified User (7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 41 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 1 week ago (1 hour, 23 minutes after post)

Aww i love this one.I can definitely relate.

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Eddieee offline Verified User (7 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 132 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 1 week ago (13 hours, 10 minutes after post)

Thanks :)

Anonymous wrote:
I love your poetry and its beautiful simplicity.

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Eddieee offline Verified User (7 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 132 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 1 week ago (13 hours, 12 minutes after post)

I’m happy you liked it. Thank you friend :)

SpazzySpizzy wrote:
Aww i love this one.I can definitely relate.

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flabbie offline Verified User (1 month, 1 week) Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 1 week ago (1 day, 2 hours after post)

cool poem… i really wish i could write poem but my english is really bad… so sad… anyway, thumbs up…

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Eddieee offline Verified User (7 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 132 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 1 week ago (1 day, 2 hours after post)

Thank you :)

evil_bust3 wrote:
cool poem… i really wish i could write poem but my english is really bad… so sad… anyway, thumbs up…

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