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Stunna’s new poem of the week!

!!!! It’s been a long while, so here it is!
it’s called “Your song on the radio”

It starts slow and than the bridge begins to build to the chorus, thoughts soaring in my head.
My neck begins to crease, my eyes begin to light up
And I gently turn up the volume of the stereo

I’m struck suddenly; the hairs on my neck stand on end and I feel weak
After all, sometimes it’s the strongest memories from such a simple song that
Are caught beneath the landslide of life
You forget about these things and you let it go,
Slide, drain, empty from inside you
But still, there’s a faint residue of remembrance of what used to be
Of phone calls at five in the morning
Sleeping in, sending texts you always wanted to save
Thinking of our demise makes me sick, and I think you should know,
No one has ever felt the way I felt about you

It hurts to think,
It’s a little impossible to keep on this drive
And worse, I wish I never turned on the radio
Sometimes I wish it was just you and I, Summer of 05

Some day you will find me
I know you will find me
After all, you knew me best
And you tried to hold on better than the rest

http://tylerstunna.blogspot.com/
http://tylerstunna.blogspot.com/2009/...

please check out my site and give me any comments or thoughts on this poem and any other ones on my site! I greatly greatly appreciate it! This poem is dedicated to a close friend of mine who had cancer.

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classicrock1818 offline Verified User (11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 76 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (7 minutes after post)

this is really **** good, and whats really good about it is, even though it is about a close friend who had cancer, it was vague enough that other people could relate to it in their own way, like about a friend who moved or a break up or something like that. i really liked it :)

maybe a little help with my song of the day? haha thanks if you can :)

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lenguita.12 offline Verified User (7 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (15 minutes after post)

i like it a lot :) u have an awesome ability to write !!!!!

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1 month, 2 weeks ago (38 minutes after post)

Welcome back, Stunna. Maybe you should change it to “Poem of the Month”?

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Stunna offline Verified User (10 months, 4 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (1 day, 9 hours after post)

Anonymous wrote:
Welcome back, Stunna. Maybe you should change it to “Poem of the Month”?

true… enough. I just don’t get comments on here like I used too :/
who is this?!

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signmycast offline Verified User (1 year, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 7 #
Dublin, 07, IE | 1 month, 2 weeks ago (1 day, 10 hours after post)

It’s been ages since your last poem :(
But I can’t complain on the quality.
This is amazing.
It really rips at the heartstrings

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Helixer offline Verified User (11 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month, 1 week ago (1 day, 19 hours after post)

I really like this one :D
I can’t think of a suggestion to give!

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Kanabi offline Verified User (1 year, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 month, 1 week ago (1 day, 20 hours after post)

I like it. Its sadder then your other poems. Did you and your girlfriend split??

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ella_kyl offline Verified User (2 months, 3 weeks) Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month ago (1 week, 2 days after post)

awesome. writing has always helped me too. I bet it sounds great to music.

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Stunna offline Verified User (10 months, 4 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Unknown Location | 1 month ago (2 weeks after post)

Kanabi wrote:
I like it. Its sadder then your other poems. Did you and your girlfriend split??

noooo, we’re closer then ever! how are you?!

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Kanabi offline Verified User (1 year, 9 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 3 weeks, 6 days ago (2 weeks, 3 days after post)

I’ve seen much happier days. thats good you guys are close :D I’m happy for you!!

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