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Sole to eat

Tra thump.
Tra thump…
Dampening beats,
As the voice whisper seeks.
To feed upon the sole,
That is open and ready to eat.

Thump…thump,
A ketch of breath,
Then run…
Before it comes to eat.

….thump.
I cant breath,
He’s right behind me,
Which way now..
I cant seem to see.

….
A grug from his voice leaves,
He has devoured me…
No more sole for him to eat.

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Eddieee offline Verified User (7 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 132 #
An Unknown Location | 4 weeks ago (26 minutes after post)

Very good Meg.

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An Undisclosed Location | 4 weeks ago (28 minutes after post)

tehe thanks

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