tears help: Removed. - Help.com

Removed.

“Again”

This closed post was written 4 weeks, 1 day ago | V/U/S: 83, 9, 1 | Edit Post | Report Post


Reciprocity (2) Many thank yous! The poster has helped others since their own post was made.

Since writing this post Legion has helped in 2 other users' posts within the last 4 days. Legion is a verified member, has been around for 8 months, 2 weeks and has 51 posts and 256 replies to their name.

Post Tags (2)

Replies (9)

Where were you?

Click and drag to move the map around. FAQ: How we place people on this map »
You can also watch events on Help.com as they happen
Mouse over the map for 2 seconds to see an expanded, interactive view

Legion invited 4 users to read this post 4 weeks, 1 day ago.

Help me with: Poem: Silent madness.
Legion offline Verified User (8 months, 2 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 60 #
An Undisclosed Location | 4 weeks, 1 day ago (3 minutes after post)

Could still use some help with my other post aswell. If people want to know the backstory to this.

http://help.com/post/325131-almost-th…

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators
Help me with: Poem: Silent madness.

Legion closed this post.

Legion edited this post 4 weeks ago. Read the previous text »

Poem: Tears.

A poem afterall, i must be waking up. Warning: Once again a dark poem.

Tears.

Tears.

Unable to flow, locked behind the wall.
Or all spilled too easily, eyes now dry.
Now blinded by anger of demons past.
Of people that kicked me, then watched me fall.

Alone and devoid of all but rage.
Love now seems missing, gone.
The eyes once so warm now fade out.
The flame of my soul, stuck in erase.

Visions of tears, In the eyes of the weak.
Tears are not for me, the shell abides.
The man inside seems dead, I’ve found.
That it might not be myself that I seek.

Your eyes witness only the anger the pain.
But the torment is endless, it drowns me.
Past I’d wish to kill, to thrown It all away.
Memories of my life, driving me insane.

Sink thought the floor Disappear for good.
Cheating life itself, a death of this plague.
As I blink I see my grave, I gasp for air.
End it all, forget my past, I wish I could.

Still there’s no tears, My eyes now on fire.
Rivers flow inside, sorrow gliding through.
Screaming in pain inside, why am I so ugly.
Ugly on the inside, Angers all left to desire.

The mask now chokes me, I’m begging why.
With harsh and cold, bloodshot soulless eyes.
Gone are my feelings, devoid from my mind.
Eyes closed in torment, my eyes that can’t cry.

Legion.

I’m not asking for help, for help is beyond me. I’m just asking for people to rate the poem, and perhaps inspire me to go on.

Help me with: Poem: Silent madness.

Legion reopened this post.

Legion edited this post 4 weeks ago. Read the previous text »

Removed.

Help me with: Poem: Silent madness.
Max offline Verified User (1 year, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 192 #
An Unknown Location | 4 weeks ago (23 hours after post)

Good writing man. You got skills!

Quote this reply Report this reply to moderators

Legion closed this post.

Legion edited this post 4 weeks ago. Read the previous text »

Poem: Tears.

A poem afterall, i must be waking up. Warning: Once again a dark poem.

Tears.

Tears.

Unable to flow, locked behind the wall.
Or all spilled too easily, eyes now dry.
Now blinded by anger of demons past.
Of people that kicked me, then watched me fall.

Alone and devoid of all but rage.
Love now seems missing, gone.
The eyes once so warm now fade out.
The flame of my soul, stuck in erase.

Visions of tears, In the eyes of the weak.
Tears are not for me, the shell abides.
The man inside seems dead, I’ve found.
That it might not be myself that I seek.

Your eyes witness only the anger the pain.
But the torment is endless, it drowns me.
Past I’d wish to kill, to thrown It all away.
Memories of my life, driving me insane.

Sink thought the floor Disappear for good.
Cheating life itself, a death of this plague.
As I blink I see my grave, I gasp for air.
End it all, forget my past, I wish I could.

Still there’s no tears, My eyes now on fire.
Rivers flow inside, sorrow gliding through.
Screaming in pain inside, why am I so ugly.
Ugly on the inside, Angers all left to desire.

The mask now chokes me, I’m begging why.
With harsh and cold, bloodshot soulless eyes.
Gone are my feelings, devoid from my mind.
Eyes closed in torment, my eyes that can’t cry.

Legion.

I’m not asking for help, for help is beyond me. I’m just asking for people to rate the poem, and perhaps inspire me to go on.

Help me with: Poem: Silent madness.

This post has been closed, no more replies. Thanks!

Invite Others to Help

Seeing as this post is closed, no invites are allowed.