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Read and rate, pleeease…

I will love you forever! :)
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http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2738497...
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2738494...
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2738499...
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2738504...
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2738501...

The first one is mid-length, semi-dark.
The second is short and adventurous.
The third is long but funny.
The fourth and fifth are works in progress.

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Coalesce invited 20 users to read this post 2 weeks, 5 days ago.

J.N Location unknown offline Verified User (8 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 441 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 weeks, 5 days ago (7 minutes after post)

Thank’s for the invite, going to read them now ………..

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Help me with: IDIOT SIGHTING”S - The sad thing is these are all true.
Coalesce offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 31 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 5 days ago (9 minutes after post)

I LOVE YOU FOREVER! :)

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smartikles31 offline Verified User (3 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 26 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 5 days ago (16 minutes after post)

i am gonna read them right now :)

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Help me with: this is for everyone who has lost a pet/friend …warning it is sad!
Coalesce offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 31 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 5 days ago (21 minutes after post)

People I will love forever:

J.N Not Lost - Found
Smartikles31

:)

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smartikles31 offline Verified User (3 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 26 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 5 days ago (21 minutes after post)

heeehehehehee:)

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J.N Location unknown offline Verified User (8 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 441 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 weeks, 5 days ago (1 hour, 1 minute after post)

Coalesce wrote:
People I will love forever:

J.N Not Lost - Found
Smartikles31

:)

Ill hold you to that!

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smartikles31 offline Verified User (3 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 26 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 5 days ago (1 hour, 7 minutes after post)

hahaa :)

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Coalesce offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 31 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 5 days ago (1 hour, 15 minutes after post)

I love J.N and Smarty yes I do!
I love them both, so should you!
Hug and squeeze them all day long!
Just don’t touch their bums, that’d be wrong!

YAY! :)

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J.N Location unknown offline Verified User (8 months, 3 weeks) Long Term User Shouts: 441 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 weeks, 5 days ago (1 hour, 19 minutes after post)

Coalesce wrote:
I love J.N and Smarty yes I do!
I love them both, so should you!
Hug and squeeze them all day long!
Just don’t touch their bums, that’d be wrong!

YAY! :)

Ha ha ha :)

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Dr. Ralph online Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 70 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 5 days ago (2 hours, 25 minutes after post)

zzzzzzzzz……. too desciptive. I hate myself for saying that.

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Help me with: They just started year round school here and the kids are on fall break.
Coalesce offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 31 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 5 days ago (2 hours, 35 minutes after post)

Don’t hate yourself for saying that! If that’s the truth, that’s what I need to hear :)

I enjoy writing, but unless others enjoy my writing as well it will be pointless.

I most definitely appreciate honest criticism :)

Note to self: Less descriptive language

And…

I will love Dr. Ralph forever! :)

PS - Maybe take a look at the 3rd one? Not nearly as much descriptive language.

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Dr. Ralph online Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 70 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 5 days ago (3 hours, 23 minutes after post)

How did you know I only read the first two???

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Help me with: They just started year round school here and the kids are on fall break.
Coalesce offline Verified User (1 year, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 31 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 5 days ago (3 hours, 48 minutes after post)

! :)
Lulz
I am in the internets peeking over your shoulders.

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smartikles31 offline Verified User (3 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 26 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 5 days ago (3 hours, 59 minutes after post)

lol :)

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