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There are many things I would like to tell you.

First of all,
My heart is not made of metal.
It is made of glass,
And it shatters easily.
I gave it to you,
Don’t break it.

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MortallyWounded offline Verified User (1 year, 3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 124 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 6 days ago (3 minutes after post)

Nice poetry! I write a bit myself.

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2 weeks, 6 days ago (5 minutes after post)

ill keep it safe
Ill keep it really close
so that when i give it back to you, mine will go with you too :)

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bri8br offline Verified User (9 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 6 days ago (7 minutes after post)

Mortally Wounded- Thank you very much :) I would like to read some of yours!

Anonymous- That is so sweet!! :)

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Dr. Ralph offline Verified User (1 year, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 75 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 6 days ago (12 minutes after post)

Does anyone know where I left my sledghammer?

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MortallyWounded offline Verified User (1 year, 3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 124 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 6 days ago (13 minutes after post)

bri8br wrote:
Mortally Wounded- Thank you very much :) I would like to read some of yours!

Anonymous- That is so sweet!! :)

Some is on my profile

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~LazyDaze~ offline Verified User (2 years, 5 months) Help.com Volunteer Moderator Long Term User Shouts: 434 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 weeks, 6 days ago (15 minutes after post)

Cute poem :)

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bri8br offline Verified User (9 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 6 days ago (20 minutes after post)

~LazyDaze~ wrote:
Cute poem :)

thanks :)

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~LazyDaze~ offline Verified User (2 years, 5 months) Help.com Volunteer Moderator Long Term User Shouts: 434 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 weeks, 6 days ago (22 minutes after post)

Anonymous wrote:
ill keep it safe
Ill keep it really close
so that when i give it back to you, mine will go with you too :)

Ahhh that was also cute and almost a follow on from the poem :D

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thep offline Verified User (1 year, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 15 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 weeks, 6 days ago (26 minutes after post)

bri8br.
Nice, and condensed. I dont write much myself but reading it gives me a lot of pleasure at times.

Dr. Ralph.
I think your sledgehammer is next to my chainsaw in the garden shed.

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sahaven offline Verified User (3 weeks, 6 days) Shouts: 96 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 6 days ago (39 minutes after post)

ty :)

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Snar offline Verified User (2 years, 2 months) Long Term User Shouts: 41 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 weeks, 6 days ago (40 minutes after post)

Not bad, feels like it needs a second half though.

Keep writing :)its good stuff.

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turner.bell offline Verified User (5 months) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 5 days ago (2 hours, 19 minutes after post)

I like this :D I’d love to hear the other things you have to say!!

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bri8br offline Verified User (9 months, 1 week) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 5 days ago (3 hours, 37 minutes after post)

thanks to all of your nice comments!! I have written a lot more and you can find it with all of my posts. I love these comments, they make me feel so much happier.

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sahaven offline Verified User (3 weeks, 6 days) Shouts: 96 #
An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 5 days ago (7 hours, 27 minutes after post)

bri8br wrote:
thanks to all of your nice comments!! I have written a lot more and you can find it with all of my posts. I love these comments, they make me feel so much happier.

thanks for liking my cute lines too bri8br :)

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