Hey, i have made a short college film and would find it helpful if you could tell me what is good about it and what i could do to make it better? - Help.com

I really liked it! :D I thought it was very well put together. The only thing I could really suggest is to lose the split screen in the scene with the phone. People will know what you’re getting at with the “what?” and then “I’m on my way”. Other than that, I really enjoyed it :D

I think it was great! I don’t know very much about making films but I make it a hobbie to watch them lol! I have a friend who just graduated college in that same field. Like I said I dont know much about it but i’ve watched many of his films and enjoyed them as well. I agree with beardyman though. I also had a hard time understanding what the woman was saying in the video. And being a girl…the second song gave me butterflies which definitely served its part in the film. Thanks for makin that i’d love 2 see more