Another Light

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here is a poem i wrote

Oh, where is my place in the world
Won’t someone see me lying here?
Help! I need help
But no one comes

I’m just lying here
I feel like…like, I’m dying
Oh, when is someone going to find me

It’s dark and cold
I’m scared
I can’t see
What is this place and how did I get here?

Oh, wait…there…in the distance
A man tall and brave
He smiles and a light goes on
And I feel heat

He leaves without a word
But being scared
I walk to the light

I find a boy that hugs my leg
He told me to follow him
I follow…I am happy and content

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Anonymous #
2 weeks, 6 days ago (6 minutes after post)

Very well written - you should be very proud of this.

Anonymous #
2 weeks, 6 days ago (8 minutes after post)

thanks i worte others…..should i post them

Anonymous #
2 weeks, 6 days ago (12 minutes after post)

Anonymous wrote:
thanks i worte others…..should i post them

Absolutely, but only if you want advice on them. you might want to try www.fictionpress.com and review other people to get more reviews yourself.

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An Unknown Location | 2 weeks, 6 days ago (15 minutes after post)

Very good! Keep it up :)

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