can you dig this song? - Help.com

its cool man, no worries.

BoA wrote:
Hey, I really like the song, in fact, the other one too!! They’re nice and calming… (:
I’ve got no complaints, maybe I’ll realize that something wasn’t good if you change it for better- you said that you’ll add drums and piano and stuff, so… I hope to hear that soon :D
Oh yeah, about the vocals- I don’t think they’re too loud, maybe even opposite.

thanks man, i really appreciate it. we’re going to add drums some time this week, and piano and bass when my friends come in for thanksgiving. so i’ll try to post the progress as it changes.

Miss Jessica Bunny wrote:
The melody was good but I couldn’t hear any vocals. Was there singing all the way through or was it just music? Cos I could only hear music… I listened to the other tract too, very chilled :)

yea, theres vocals at the beginning and end of the song. not words though, just “ahh’s”. i might add some lyrics later on down the road, but for now it will stay instrumental.

campion wrote:
I REALLY really like it. i love the tune please god keep it coming. you have talent, sir, and that is a fact!! :D

thank you for the kind words, im really glad you liked it. and i’ll certainly try to keep writing and recording and all that

Max wrote:
Pretty good:) Calming for the most part and I heard the little change ups. Were you trying to make the melody a hook? I’m not that good at defining, I just like listening. Keep it going:)

to be honest with you, i have no idea what a hook is :-{ care to elaborate a bit further?