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Amor Vincit Omnia (Poem)


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(My first try after 5 months. I only wrote a poem 3 times in my life and that was by the end of 2009-2010. A very dear friend of mine was my inspiration.)

As bright days come and go, I find myself in bed reposing.
I lay my head back down, my body peacefully between the sheets resting;
But in my restless dreams, I see that endless place.
I hear your laugher, and then I see your face.

From the dark end of these woods; endless depths of blackness,
I compare its reflection in the mirror; drowning me in overwhelming cold madness.
And to the bright side of these woods, your gentle warm hand I take,
To find our way by moonlight; wondering if I’m asleep, or if I am awake.

Under the starry heaven, a conversation of longing has ensued,
‘’Is it safe to believe with so many miles that divide?’’ The question again previewed.
Loosening my hair, I kiss the nap of your neck; silencing the question.
And then your feverish lips I find, exchanging the taste of our burning passion.

Laid together in hot embrace, entwined in a bed of leaves and weeping desire,
Tightening around you we fall into wet heated rhymes, consuming us like sparkling red fire.
Dripping sighs whirled past us into the night. In each other’s arms, we madly writhe in pleasure,
We can’t deny this passion no more, and then moans and groans followed high beyond measure.

‘’Ahh…!’’ Breathless, you hold me against you, hair arranged over your loving chest,
And I shed a tear or two, wondering if after this will we ever find some rest.
Someone said to not be afraid of the space between your dreams and reality,
For if you can dream it, then you can always make it so.

As brighter days come and go, I find myself in bed reposing.
I lay my head back down, my body peacefully between the sheets resting;
But in my restless dreams, I see that endless place.
I hear your laugher, and then I see your face… again.

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Goodbye Horses offline Verified User (3 years, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
An Undisclosed Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (3 hours, 23 minutes after post)

Cool. I like how the music sets the tone for the poem. My favorite part is probably the stuff about the woods and not knowing whether you’re awake or not or in-between different realities. That’s what I can relate to the most anyway… on a personal level

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An Unknown Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (3 hours, 28 minutes after post)

Haha, thank you! I was acctually listening to that song when I began to write it. It sets me in a mysterious mood and I wanted to express my own feelings as well… I myself don’t know if the character was dreaming or was awake. I am currently writing something new but with the same characters as well. I know what you mean and I can relate to the female character as well on a personal level. :)

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An Unknown Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (3 hours, 46 minutes after post)

Interesting..
The fifth stanza…
“wondering if after this will we ever find some rest.”
Just wondering what the deeper meaning was..

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An Unknown Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (7 hours, 17 minutes after post)

R.A.M wrote:
Interesting..
The fifth stanza…
“wondering if after this will we ever find some rest.”
Just wondering what the deeper meaning was..

Did it ever happen to you that you fell for someone and they fell for you, yet you know that you cannot be together because of some reason, but you know that sooner or later, you two can finally reunite and be together in eachother’s arms. The characters in the story met through their dreams, not physically but their spirits were there, in the woods. After making love for the first time, they realized that things will change, that there is no turning back… That no rest can they find until they reunite once more, in a dream within a dream, or simply in real life… Pysically… But until.. the last paragraph says it all.. Things repeat themselves.

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An Unknown Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (7 hours, 43 minutes after post)

:)
Yeah! can relate to the first part quite easily… The second part… well, thats wishful thinking at times…
I know Im being a bit of a buzz kill… but, lets see time is still there… who knows what the future holds :P
Comes out quite nicely I have to say…
Nice work!
Small Q? The comming back together… wishful thinking or reality?

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An Unknown Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (7 hours, 46 minutes after post)

Hi Sylvanas…
Sorry…
No need to answer the question…
Once again… nice work!

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An Unknown Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (7 hours, 50 minutes after post)

Hello R.A.M

Yes, they are coming back together.. wishful thinking again :)
It’s all in my head and I need to get the ideas out, but how? Haha, only time will help me out. I’d love to concentrate on their emotions toward the situation this time. I don’t know what the setting will be.. The woods? I am obsessed with the woods, might be the new setting as it might be a different place.

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An Unknown Location | 2 years, 5 months ago (8 hours, 1 minute after post)

Good to hear!
You know, wishful thinking is what dreams are made out off… just helps not to loose sight of it!
Emotions are tough to put into words… but poetry helps to bring them about some what…
Here, too love the outdoors… can just spend days, especially if there is a stream nearby… Somehow makes things all magical and simple in ways!
Have fun with it…

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An Unknown Location | 11 months, 3 weeks ago (1 year, 5 months after post)

Holly sh!t! my gosh i shiver. its amazing!!

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