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Did you write that? It is inspiring.

Look at the path, you lost burdened child
See where you´ve been, what you have left behind
No more will you linger in the lessons you learn
The future is yours, the past you can burn

I looked at your closed post. Sorry if I am stalking. But I wanted to see if you wrote any thing else. Any way, I love the things you have wrote.

Can I asked you if your were abused? They sound like that come from a person who has overcome. Like when I read “The strength within” I wanted to give it to a girl I know who has been abused.

And if I could make a suggestion even though you have not asked for one. The “be all you can be” at the end moved me from feeling this wonderful encouragement, to thinking of the army. That is their slogan. Be all you can be. So maybe wording it another way. I even hate to say that to you because I feel like who am I to suggest that. So I hope it does not bother you that I made that suggestion.

Well you are very empathetic to be able to write like this and it is inspired by how you think someone else feels.

You’re even stronger then me. Works nicely. :)

Thanks for the invite, Babacup.

Grim, this is so beautifully written and so inspiring. As everyone else in here, I come across so many posts in which this would be the exact “right” thing to say to someone desperately in need of some encouragement. With your permission, whenever appropriate, I’d love to share this link with people in need of your beautiful words.

I love this Grim. It is nice to read poetry from a male for a change. You are in touch. I shall do some stalking too actually, read some more of your words. Thanks heaps for the invite Babacup!

lol…you’re not such a hardcastle after all..good job man:)

Oh yeahhhhhh….this is reallllly good! And it seems as though you will have a bunch of stalkers..:o) I loved this…
Thank You for the invite, EarthGoddess! :)

NotJustWhistlinDIXIE wrote:
“That which has not killed me has just served to make me stronger” ~Frederich Nietzsche …Nice way that you put it into your own words. Thanks for the invite, EG.

And hey EG, for the following statement (my dear friend)…bite me. LOLlolLOLlol

EarthGoddess wrote:
…nice to read poetry from a male for a change.

Hey Dixie, we found a SNAG (sensitive new age guy) that’s all i mean by that! Nothin wrong with us gals writing poetry, but don’t you admit it IS nice to read one from a male!??? So, where’s your latest?

SNAG, hmm. What does new age mean?

I wish a lot of people knew this ^^

Normally I hear new age being used in reference to certain religions. Neo-pagans and so on. I don’t even know what that means either. But some of them seemed like they had to do with an emphasis on self being god.
But in this context, no idea ^^

Ahh. I see. ^^

Very nice, I was invited by Earthgoddess, thank you.
It’s very nice, only i can’t look past the hurtful words.
I start to rise up then the words come
and i fall down again

Grim I like your new avatar. Quite the gentleman now, aren’t we?

Grim_Hardcastle wrote:

DarkSnow wrote:
SNAG, hmm. What does new age mean?

Can´t really get my head around that either..

A real Snag in Australia is another way of saying sausage, but for sometime now, we have called the more sensitive, understanding guys - SNAG. Sensitive New Age Guys! I will have to get back to you on the term New Age. I know what it means but hard to explain, and I do want to get it right, so i shall get back to you all on this one. EGx

yeh we have a pretty funny sense o humour us Aussies. I said, “throw a snag on the barbie, mate!” so he threw a sausage at the barbie doll! hehehe
I is being really silly now, getting a bit late here and i is getting over tired!

thanks for the poetry i really realate to that and it helps me alot

Thats awesome. I love it.

clunkY
sometimes leaves my lips
like the amtrak shakes on its rails
to grind into the station of my cortex
late as always

jk…im stilling waiting for your poetic masterpiece mr. hardcastle

fab.

“Look again if you don´t believe
See what i see
Don´t fall for the hurtful words
You´re even stronger than me..”

just love it..

“The strength within
Not easily found
It´s always there though
Like it´s nailed to the ground”

i really like the beginning. thanks for the help.

i like this :)