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Honestly, what do you think of this song.

Lyrically, musically, and production. I want some real input and critique. The video is lame (I just picked a random picture from work) but I really want to know what you think about the song.
Thanks
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J9iVNZ...

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priddypaisle offline Verified User (1 year, 7 months) Long Term User Shouts: 0 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 7 months ago (6 minutes after post)

Is this a virus?

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stevethemeve offline Verified User (5 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 7 months ago (9 minutes after post)

Nope, youtube is pretty safe.

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Help me with: Anyone like this song?
stevethemeve offline Verified User (5 years, 4 months) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 7 months ago (13 minutes after post)

Seriously just looking for an outside perspective. This Isn’t a virus.. I mean, It’s a youtube link.

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Help me with: Anyone like this song?
.Eli. offline Verified User (3 years, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 7 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year, 7 months ago (27 minutes after post)

Shounds horrible to me, like someone out of breath and with a serious lack of testosterone (if it’s a man who’s singing) trying to sing to a guitar out of tune.

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Anonymous #
1 year, 5 months ago (1 month, 2 weeks after post)

has potential

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Lost nocturnal offline Verified User (1 year, 6 months) Long Term User Shouts: 9 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year, 5 months ago (1 month, 3 weeks after post)

I agree with anon has potential, you need a good vocal coach, and this piece just needs work and polishing and it should be good. If you are planning to do this types of song, it will most likely be a grower base. So either lyrics or melodies are very important. Good luck

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