Thought help: Songs & Secrets - Help.com

Savanna_ wrote:
I see you got over your writers block :)
Another great poem, always so descriptive. it is hard to share your secrets with others, huh?

Thanks S. :)
As broken and encrypted as they may be, I spill my secrets in my poems.

Savanna_ wrote:
er, sorry. I am failing at being a cheery person. Is this about someone you love in your life?

Not to worry S, No one knows who Cheery is. Though I really should make a point of meeting them someday. ;)

IamArn wrote:
awesome poem, keep making them.

Thank you Arn. :)

Z-Anonymous wrote:
i just got online and there was a new poem.
i really like this one. first i thought maybe you had a new love who dared to share and then shut down. then i thought, wait maybe this is a little autobiographical cause you have a song inside but you only share it cryptically

i’d like there to be a 4th verse where the lid is lifted

Thank you Z :)

A fourth verse. . . I will have a look but I make no promises.

Z-Anonymous wrote:

Eddieeee wrote:

Z-Anonymous wrote:
i just got online and there was a new poem.
i really like this one. first i thought maybe you had a new love who dared to share and then shut down. then i thought, wait maybe this is a little autobiographical cause you have a song inside but you only share it cryptically

i’d like there to be a 4th verse where the lid is lifted

Thank you Z :)

A fourth verse. . . I will have a look but I make no promises.

no promises ever necessary. and really, maybe a fourth verse isn’t needed, i was talking with a friend about how good books (and i suppose poems) always leave the reader wondering what next. so i guess i was filling in my own what next.

We are all looking for a happy ending. But sometimes it is hard to tell what that may be. For me, there is peace in the letting go, meaning spilling words to a page. There is comfort for me in that. I know I twist and struggle with every word I write, but in this madness, I willingly fall to my knees.
In that vein, here is the fourth verse.

I see the vultures and theives at your back
And I know there is no slack
So on the ground, I beg you to let me in
Meeting in this darkness, we may just find a way to win

CtrlAltDelete wrote:
That was nice (:

Thank you for saying so.

Z-Anonymous wrote:
thanks for the fourth verse…i like that very much. two who share are stronger than one in hiding, yes?

:)
I hope it helped quench.

As for me,I really don’t know. Once one gets to hiding, it is hard no to. I get that much passes by in this place. And screams are no longer heard. But in my poems I give all that I was, or ever could be.