Love help: Kiss the rain

Eddieeee

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Kiss the rain

As the rain pours down
I hold you
As the earth holds ground
I kiss you

Your hands in mine
I feel more than fine
Until the dawn
We make love on the lawn

Kissing your mouth
The rain pours on
Until the earth is gone

Kiss the rain!!!

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Savanna_ 41 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (8 minutes after post)

That’s nice :)

Someone you love?

Help me with: Just writing..

Eddieeee 12 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (9 minutes after post)

Savanna_ wrote:
That’s nice :)

Someone you love?

Yes, very much!

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Savanna_ 41 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (11 minutes after post)

That’s great eddieee. Glad to see you happy.

Help me with: Just writing..

BIG AL ONE 340 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (16 minutes after post)

That’s very good eddieee.
If I had a girl to do that with, I’d steal this poem:P

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Eddieeee 12 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (17 minutes after post)

Savanna_ wrote:
That’s great eddieee. Glad to see you happy.

LOL
This story does not have a happy ending.
This writes more like a story where all goes wrong. Hearts and souls torn from skin and bone.

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Eddieeee 12 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (19 minutes after post)

BIG AL ONE wrote:
That’s very good eddieee.
If I had a girl to do that with, I’d steal this poem:P

Take it Al. . .
there is no girl, just the thought of a love long gone.

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BIG AL ONE 340 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (21 minutes after post)

Eddieeee wrote:

Savanna_ wrote:
That’s great eddieee. Glad to see you happy.

LOL
This story does not have a happy ending.
This writes more like a story where all goes wrong. Hearts and souls torn from skin and bone.

Perhaps you could provide an additional passage to the text.
Honestly, the finale is too open ended and could be looked at as good ending.

Eddieeee wrote:

BIG AL ONE wrote:
That’s very good eddieee.
If I had a girl to do that with, I’d steal this poem:P

Take it Al. . .
there is no girl, just the thought of a love long gone.

Aww, thanks. . .but that’s about all I have too, I’m afraid.

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Eddieeee 12 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (27 minutes after post)

Never be afraid Al. All gets sorted, no matter our intentions.

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BIG AL ONE 340 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (31 minutes after post)

Eddieeee wrote:
Never be afraid Al. All gets sorted, no matter our intentions.

That’s very kind of you to say so, Eddieee. At my age, there’s little that I fear. Most of life has done its sorting for me. It’s all roses from here.

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Savanna_ 41 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (33 minutes after post)

Eddieeee wrote:

Savanna_ wrote:
That’s great eddieee. Glad to see you happy.

LOL
This story does not have a happy ending.
This writes more like a story where all goes wrong. Hearts and souls torn from skin and bone.

oh. I’m sorry :(

Help me with: Just writing..

Eddieeee 12 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (36 minutes after post)

Savanna_ wrote:

Eddieeee wrote:

Savanna_ wrote:
That’s great eddieee. Glad to see you happy.

LOL
This story does not have a happy ending.
This writes more like a story where all goes wrong. Hearts and souls torn from skin and bone.

oh. I’m sorry :(

Don’t be. Just how it goes sometimes. Love stories are full of such riddles.

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BuckingFastard (J.N) 52 #
An Unknown Location | 1 year ago (54 minutes after post)

You got an ‘as’ wrong.
It doesn’t match the original, copy & paste failed you my friend

Kiss the rain!!!

As the rain pours down
I hold you
As the earth holds ground
I kiss you

Your hands in mine
I feel more than fine
Until the dawn
We make love on the lawn

Kissing your mouth
The rain pours on
Until the earth is gone

Kiss the rain!!!

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TranquilTempest 10 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (1 hour, 15 minutes after post)

It’s lovely Eddieee, great work as always :)

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Eddieeee 12 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (1 day, 19 hours after post)

BuckingFastard (J.N) wrote:
You got an ‘as’ wrong.
It doesn’t match the original, copy & paste failed you my friend

Kiss the rain!!!

As the rain pours down
I hold you
As the earth holds ground
I kiss you

Your hands in mine
I feel more than fine
Until the dawn
We make love on the lawn

Kissing your mouth
The rain pours on
Until the earth is gone

Kiss the rain!!!

What “as” did I get wrong?

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Eddieeee 12 #
An Undisclosed Location | 1 year ago (1 day, 19 hours after post)

TranquilTempest wrote:
It’s lovely Eddieee, great work as always :)

Thank you :)

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