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Savanna_ offline Verified User (1 year, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 32 #
An Undisclosed Location | 12 months ago (5 minutes after post)

Sleep is a wonderful escape. Too bad it only seems to last for moments..

I’m sorry you feel that way, Eddieee.. :(

What troubles you?

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Eddieee offline Verified User (4 years, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 37 #
An Undisclosed Location | 12 months ago (9 minutes after post)

Savanna_ wrote:
Sleep is a wonderful escape. Too bad it only seems to last for moments..

I’m sorry you feel that way, Eddieee.. :(

What troubles you?

No worries S, just very tired. Sat down at the computer and that is what came out. I just need some rest from working way too much.

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▲ offline Verified User (2 years, 10 months) Long Term User Shouts: 3 #
An Undisclosed Location | 12 months ago (15 minutes after post)

Hmm, I like it…

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Savanna_ offline Verified User (1 year, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 32 #
An Undisclosed Location | 12 months ago (16 minutes after post)

oh yea, me too :D

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Eddieee offline Verified User (4 years, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 37 #
An Undisclosed Location | 12 months ago (18 minutes after post)

Reason for Action wrote:
Hmm, I like it…

Savanna_ wrote:
oh yea, me too :D

Thanks :)

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mintra offline Verified User (3 years, 3 months) Long Term User Shouts: 2 #
An Unknown Location | 12 months ago (1 hour, 3 minutes after post)

That reminds me

bed time

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Dalek Karan offline Verified User (2 years, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 10 #
An Unknown Location | 12 months ago (1 hour, 5 minutes after post)

Shakespeare in his time used Grammar and punctuation, why can’t you?

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Eddieee offline Verified User (4 years, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 37 #
An Undisclosed Location | 12 months ago (1 hour, 6 minutes after post)

mintra wrote:
That reminds me

bed time

Should I say good night mintra or are you just making a note of it?

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Eddieee offline Verified User (4 years, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 37 #
An Undisclosed Location | 12 months ago (1 hour, 7 minutes after post)

FatB.Three wrote:
Shakespeare in his time used Grammar and punctuation, why can’t you?

LOL, None was needed here.

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Dalek Karan offline Verified User (2 years, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 10 #
An Unknown Location | 12 months ago (1 hour, 22 minutes after post)

Eddieee wrote:

FatB.Three wrote:
Shakespeare in his time used Grammar and punctuation, why can’t you?

LOL, None was needed here.

It is the poet’s job not just to scribal down some riming slang, but to get the reader to read the text in the way it should be read.
This is called Grammar and punctuation.

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Eddieee offline Verified User (4 years, 1 month) Long Term User Shouts: 37 #
An Undisclosed Location | 12 months ago (1 hour, 29 minutes after post)

FatB.Three wrote:

Eddieee wrote:
FatB.Three wrote:
Shakespeare in his time used Grammar and punctuation, why can’t you?

LOL, None was needed here.

It is the poet’s job not just to scribal down some riming slang, but to get the reader to read the text in the way it should be read.
This is called Grammar and punctuation.

I know what grammar and punctuation are. ;)
In this poem, I used the line breaks to make the pause and set the punctuation. The poem was simple enough to do just that. As for the grammar, I see no fault in it for this poem.
If you you have a suggestion, I am open to hear it. :)

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Eddieee edited this post 9 months, 3 weeks ago. Read the previous text »

Resting

No need to pray
No reason to see
All these pressures
They’re exhausting me

All the same
I’m peaceful in this deep
No question of heaven
This sinner wants to sleep

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