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Poem rough draft for school, is this ok?

When I’m gone,
will you remember​?

The days we spent,
our fun together?

The laughs we shared,
the lies we told?

The plans we made,
no fear of growing old?

These things I cherish,
and love so much!

They fill my heart,
with joy and such…

If you forget,
its still OK…

I’ll always love you anyway.

But please I ask,
don’t be like me.

Live your life,
and be happy.

For all I ever wanted,
was to see you smile.

Even if it usually,
was across the miles…

You are my world,
I should have told…

I’ll love you always,
heart and soul.

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Savanna_ offline Verified User (1 year, 11 months) Long Term User Shouts: 35 #
An Undisclosed Location | 10 months, 1 week ago (14 minutes after post)

Very nice :)

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♥ Fairytale ♥ offline Verified User (1 year, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Undisclosed Location | 10 months, 1 week ago (22 minutes after post)

not bad

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Anonymous #
10 months, 1 week ago (1 hour, 7 minutes after post)

good poem but if this is for school be warned your teachers are bound to ask whats wrong. any type of writeing that shows any sort of sadness connected to your life is bound to get questions.

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Always griffin offline Verified User (2 years, 8 months) Long Term User Shouts: 1 #
An Unknown Location | 10 months, 1 week ago (1 hour, 20 minutes after post)

Red Flag;Red flag
Are you ok, it’s very beautiful
But are you ok?
Sending you a Giant Cyber Hug

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Anonymous #
10 months, 1 week ago (1 hour, 21 minutes after post)

^ just proved my point

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