[How you make me feel - poem for my girl plz read]
I wan’t to give this to my girlfriend and want it to be perfect. I haven’t written any poetry for around 5 months now, so I want it perfect. opinions please.
I like it when you look at me
With that loving stare that sets me free
That sweet look I get from you
Makes me sure of what I want to do
Love it when you look my way
A hug from you could make my day
You bring me to a place so new-
I’m glad to say that I’m with you
I feel like the luckiest man alive because I have you.
You make me strive to do the things I want to do.
Love the way your loving touch
can break the walls that suround my heart.
and your tight embrase
can make ants out of the problems I must face.
I usually don’t write any happy poems,
but I am because of how you make me feel.
So let’s make a deal;
you stay with me and forgive my mistakes,
and my heart will always be yours to take.
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